It’s still to soon to truly judge this but what makes people angry is that we don’t know what type of story this is! Or what’s it about?! Cultivation? Horror? Post-apocalyptic? We don’t know anything despite a lot of chapters passing. Rarely interaction with characters, I love solo MCs but when you introduce characters that are close to MC, then you should show them, I’m relieved Chiba getting attention for now but it can change, who knows? Also the short chapters and cliffhangers, are not helping as it’s dragging a lot sadly. If he gets with the best girl, I think this’ll be worth reading. But I can’t trust CNs =/
just garbage but may need the author can do better
Upon completing the first chapter, I found myself instantly connecting with the protagonist, which may admittedly influence my perspective. The main character reveals that she has been living her life for her mother, which piques my interest in her upcoming character development. I eagerly anticipate witnessing her journey towards making decisions that bring her genuine happiness and personal fulfillment. This engaging narrative promises an insightful exploration of self-discovery and growth.
Liked it very much :) Your novel was the first one that made me to join as a member of this novel site. Very good story narration and well done
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Shameless author self review. Still learning how to write and I hope that as I slowly progress through the story that my writing should get better and better as I go.
honestly the novel is just great and also YOU DONT NEDD TO PAY like some many people make novels where ya have to pay like 700 bucks to read the whole thing but this author is a legend and doesn't make it pay to read
I hope you don't abandon this halfway. I'm interested in the story. It looks pretty good. I'll be waiting to read more chapters. This has potential..
I like this very much author.I hope u will continue to update it regularly and won't drop this in midway.I wish u good luck and stay healthy.
This novel is amazing, the story is intriguing the characters are well written and have clear personalities and not plain.The plot is amazing and has tons of potential, and for once it manages to surprise me, it wasn't predictable and repetitive.The MC is a villain that's a plus the FM is the same too.The personality of the MC grow with the story *SPOILER* from a rabid dog to a smarter and milder one after he learn about things his missed in the past. The world building still a bit shallow as the story is in its start but wherever the story go everything is explained.The chapters are long, so it is 3000 words of badassery (as the author said) which make the count double or almost triple the chapters, (other novels have 1000-1500 words per chapter).The author is so talented that I hate how much I love him ? ? ?.It is worth the time try it you won't regret it!
Let’s be honest, this novel is a unique novel but not the rare one. I like this kind of pet-shop-cultivation-novel but later I had gradually became so disappointed when I read the raw. The tittle novel is “Astral Pet Shop” but this novel hardly mentioned the development of the shop, they didn’t even sell the astral pet but only selling food pet and training customer’s astral pet. That’s all.What’s about the mc? Geeeh, mc is arrogant and a bit madman. Instead how to develop his own shop, mc is rather provoked every big families. He is smart but no wise. He chose to enter the outside secret realm with the risk of one time death when the system already provides him with many secret realms with endless death. The only thing he need is a little bit time, he just need to wait patiently and accumulation of money from shop but he ends up running into the greater risk and provoked some big figures.Seriously, the more i read the more disappointed i became and gradually i lose interest then I drop it.The concept itself was very good and unique but author made this novel to became so cliche. The side characters were even more worst then the mc’s. Overall rate: 5/10
I have read this until chapter 160, and to be honest, i kinda dont want to continue further. See, this book author is quite a genius imo, he can drag 2-4 chapters just to explain something. Sometimes the xplanation can be important like xplaining the fey ecosystem and ability, sometimes unimportant like how writing mc's account book how much he spend and gain every penny, and sometimes can be totally useless.like copy-pasting the same fey abilities again and again with just 1 (ONE) skill addition. A good way to fulfill your release and word quotas i guess, good for him, but not really good for me, i mostly scroll all the way every xplanation chapters and totally not missing anything important. Filler chapter is still better than this kind of chapter, at least it's more entertaining.And because of this too, the plot become slow and sometimes stagnant, it's like 3/4 xplanation and 1/4 story. Crazy right? i know. And imo the plot is getting inconsistent over time. Like, at first mc does not want to attract attention cuz he's weak, he got no backing, all that nonsense. But he stronkly pushing his sister to the front row with "my sister is awsum so she must attract attention" logic. I kinda wish his sister got killed off screen and he regret his decision in the future to be honest because of his braindead action.Also mc made a promise to trading agreement with a web shop at the beginning, saying he's not an ungrateful person who pay other's kindness, but until chapter 160 that matter never comes to surface again. Well maybe becuz mc already rich guy now so he thinks it's alright to forget his promise, and thus he become the ungrateful bastard himself. His first retainer which he promised to heal also never appear again after he told him to find a big shop in the capital. Maybe he retired and decide to donate his insect queen to mc off screen lmao.That's my opininon, go read it if you like this kind of writing. I'm not here to judge you.