I read the first twenty. It is okay. Would read more. Currently would not pay to read more. Might be good, might be a shield girl clone. Need more chapters to decide.
this review is done out of spite... but naming his hellhound "fat tiger" ruined this story and my immersion, I didn't even find it funny. i wish the translator just gave us its name in chinese instead of a literal translation, can't even continue reading...so much potential, such a good story, somehow ruined by a NAME.
Nice.
well, this is a story turning from average to better after chapter 80s. perhaps you found the beginning very much boring and you didn't understand what's happened here, but actually it becomes good and it's ending also acceptable.
The characters drove the plot to a satisfying conclusion, and resolved every issue.The plot was cleverly woven, with each scene leading toward a larger goal. The conclusion answered all the questions the story asked, and resolved the plot. It started and ended strong. The only problem is the update stability.
oh how i wish he comes back and finish the story ?? i pray he will
It's good. The writing is decent (but could be improved). The story is focused on romance (which is always welcomed). His disciples aren't all or majority females who are in love with him (which I noticed a lost of these kind of stories have a tendency to do). He's not overt with his abilities though that might not be for long considering this latest chapter. The cultivation is very convoluted and confusing. Why didn't they just go with the generic cultivation system. One annoying thing is how the writer keeps on shoving it in your face that the MC is a genius. "but of course Li blah blah is x100 time more talented so his cultivation and learning is way faster so he learnt this in half a day even though it would take them years" on repeat. Keep in mind they are talking about so called S and SS-class talents. I'm just waiting for the story to introduce SSSSS-class talents at this point. This talent system is going to become redundant at some point honestly.
this is actually very interesting and unique....... looking forward to the development of the story......next update pls....................
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I have only one thing to say: Please upload more! I'm really enjoying how this story is progressing, unfortunately no new chapters in almost a month! ???
I want to add another review because of the new arc the story is on. Honestly, it's really cool. It wasn't how i expected the story to turn out, but i'm liking it a lot. I'm just scared the author will drop it because... well I dunno, you get that feeling. He's doing bonus chapters for us and stuff... i just hope he isn't overworking and getting bored with writing