Ehhhhh..... Hi there, shameless author here.... Don't mind me.. ...... Just writing some dates that you might want to explore
410- End of an era, and begging of the dark ages in Europe
793- This date is actually somewhat relevant to the story,
1453- Very sad year, makes me depressed just thinking of it..
1709- I hate Russia..... Especially when it owned Ukraine (Poltava)
1789- How a dream can crumble so easily
1792- Death of probably Sweden's greatest king
(Many more interesting dates, but I don't feel like writing a history essay about historical dates xD)
I can't recommend this novel enough, the writing stands out so much simply because it is rare to find a novel which can present its world so well. There is never a moment where the story is dull. I hope the author continues to update this novel so we can all enjoy this masterpiece.
A good scenario, writing quality is successful, the presentation of the humanoid rulers is short and effective. it is quite understandable. thanks to the author, keep going on.
After finishing the book, I have to say that there were excellent points to the story and some not-as-great ones. Now my favorite moments in the story were that for most of the plots, the MCs had clear plot armor, like gaining new powers right when they needed it the most. Normally people frown upon plot armor, because it takes away tension if you know the MC won't actually lose. I love how the author constructed the plot armor to have an in-universe source, i.e. Ms. Kang and the Demon Lord, but it does have one problem. After the Demon Lord stops being able to manipulate the MCs' storylines, I feel that the MCs should have had a moment where they realize the extent of their previous plot armor, and perhaps had character growth as they realize they don't need it anymore. One point that I disliked was that Sakura's initial plot was supposed to be a thriller, but I think that the LGBT+ antagonism took away from the thriller plot. Now as someone who is actually bi, I don't have a problem with LGBT+. I just think that from a narrative standpoint, the reason Jason was a big antagonist was that he was transphobic, and I think Jason could have been developed more as a villain by having him kill off an acquaintance, rather than him just spouting transphobia every time he has a dialogue with Sakura. The biggest problem I had, though, was that the MCs were able to actually defeat the Demon Lord. Now I realize that they could because he let his guard down, but as soon as he was poisoned he could have just teleported away, and neutralized the poison, before returning to fight. Plus, as someone who was literally able to vaporize the entire Korean subcontinent, a fact the author seemed to gloss over, I don't think it would make in-universe sense for the MCs to think they could beat him. In-universe, that would be like someone shooting a shotgun at a nuke and expecting it to fall over, completely disarmed. I just think that perhaps the MCs themselves didn't have to defeat the Demon Lord. They could have forced a reincarnation spell on him, so he wasn't really defeated, but evicted. Or on the other hand, the Demon Lord could have either won, or let himself be killed and be like "this world bores me, but I didn't have the heart to commit suicide. so long, off to the next world" and that would have been a perfectly fine ending. Not that the original ending wasn't entertaining, it just didn't make sense worldbuilding wise. TLDR; just read it, it's a good book if you can suspend your disbelief for the ending.
It cant even clean shoes of cultivation chat group. There is nothing likeable if you are not into "oh look at me, im better than everyone else even people who are clearly better than me"
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Superb description and good food for the imaginationThe prologue caught my attention and made me unable to tear my eyes away from this title
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It is in my library, recommended
Would have been a good story but the MC personality and just his sheer stupidity is too much for me. I mean he knows about general stuff in novels so why is he so dumb
Actually, I don't want to write a review this early but I found this novel quite gems. The MC really cautions in his every action which makes him more smarter than other novels that related to the modern setup.
Right now(Chapter 7) there are 2 potential waifu appearing in the story and MC didn't immediately fall in love with them by just their beauty. I think it's good development on this aspect.
The other things that I really love it on this novel is its length of the chapters were quite long it should be around 3k words, compared to those 1k words per chap make this novel more readable.
I can see the improvement of grammar from the authors every chapter, I hope that you can keep up this good work. Cheers.
This kind of writing quality is completely out of place on this site, I'm pretty sure it's against the rules or something. The story is very detailed and relatively slow-paced, yet it doesn't feel boring at all. For some reason even the characters behave reasonably and very believably, almost like real people. This novel should be way more popular, but it just had to have a cover art, that looks like 90s computer graphics, so there's no way around it.
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