Wow I’m stuck here
I am loving the story so far
a bit childish and misspelled words. This book is aimed at teenage kids, however I don't approve of the devil worshiping. Kids need to know GOD is master of all creators.
The worse novel I've read in the past 3 years! A waste of money which I would gladly ask for a refund.
The story of abuse, mental and physical violence, and harassment. A stupid, powerless, useless woman falls for an SM monster, and stays at her son's expenses.
The characters are so engaging! Looking forward to getting through more chapters and see how they develop.
I thoroughly enjoyed this book, despite ugly crying a few times. This one was very heartbreaking and heartwarming, but amazing from start to finish! I just love everything Miri writes!
good so far
The story had a pleasant narrative, but I believe it could have tapped into more depth. The concept of transmigration felt superfluous; it was mainly used to justify the protagonist's ghost-sight abilities and性格 shift, which could have been handled differently without resorting to such an explanation. The transmigration plot felt forced, as there was no clear reason for her past life or the sudden reincarnation.
The ghost aspect held some intrigue, but I felt it could have been delved into further. As a professional actress, the character's career in acting and the entertainment industry could have been expanded. Despite being a star in a relatively short period, it didn't seem realistic, considering the fast-paced nature of the industry. The book barely scratched the surface of her filmography and public image, which could have been a more significant focus.
While there were hints of new talent, the book only mentioned a handful of actors and actresses. The supporting characters were underdeveloped, with the main characters lacking meaningful friendships. The male lead's doctor friend was present solely for medical emergencies, without any proper introduction or social interaction.
Overall, the story was satisfactory with a happy ending, but it had numerous loose ends and missed opportunities for growth. It left me feeling that the potential was wasted.
Actually, I really love stories with systems and calm protagonists, especially when they have a showbiz tag. So, the main character (MC) quitting entertainment to become an athlete is fine; it’s not too boring. However, I really felt like both crying and laughing at how Mary Sue-like and overpowered the MC became thanks to the system tasks and rewards. It felt really illogical.
The MC had a time of 10.30 seconds in his latest training and entered a competition. Surprisingly, he upgraded his level from Run 1.0 to Run 2.0 just before the race started. In the preliminary round, he clocked 10.21 seconds. Then, in the next match, he got 10.19 seconds. I thought the MC would control his speed to make the improvement less obvious, but he ended up with 10.18 seconds in the final match. Dude, that's too much of a gap for someone who has been resting for two years. Imagine going from 10.30 seconds to 10.18 seconds in less than two weeks! Real athletes train for years to achieve such improvements. Even with a system, it should take at least six months, not two weeks. This just doesn’t work for me.
Skill issue
The one issue that holds me back from reading this novel is the MC's motivations. It is shallow and not one I care too much about from what the synopsis mentions. Could anyone shed some light on this without massive spoilers?
I remember when this novel passed oracle paths in ranking