This novel is unique and interesting in my opinion. Keep up the release rate and you are destined to be in top 10!
About the story: World is not too detailed but this helps the story progressing. Balance between real the world and virtual reality is good. You will not get confused. Not much grammar errors. The story is progressing in good pace. Good flirting and R-16 scenes.
Advice: Do not repeat the last sentence of the previous chapter in the next chapter. That's just takes up the space. You can add a bit more details and use a wider range of words. I don't know how the MC looks like, please change this!
(This review is made when the novel just started and I will change it as time passes. Hope everyone gained something from this post.)
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Not sure if this novel has a future. The only thing that I can see happening is him being op and the other people exclaiming about it for 300+ chapters. Rinse and repeat. There is no substance here. Read Reincarnation of the Sword God if you want something with some substance. Translation quality is decent though.
reads like an mtl novel
eg we are introduced to a dude named omega,turns out he's a she but wait the mcs calling her big brother now oh and also we'll randomly change her name from omega to ao something In the middle of a paragraph.
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another example would be them saying that the mc who is a rank 3 god and is num 90 on the board is above rank 6 gods who are below him in the rankings then they show two magister level people ranked 95-96 so you're telling us that there above rank 6 gods aswell?? what kind of golden finger having mc's are they?
it's alright
I love this the character sounds cool I honestly hope these get picked pls author make this quick I can't wait to read it
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The story moves at a steady pace and the MC seems quite caring and likeable. The world background is also well explained. The writing could use some editing, but overall it's shaping up to be an interesting read.
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I love your novel! It is a great story! I’m a representative editor from Stary.ltd. If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact adaren06*@*gmail.com(delete *).
Didn't expect this when I read the title. Great job on the book so far though. I think this book will grow a lot the more you publish chapters. 100% loved it!
This really challenged my mind as I was trying to break down exactly what's happening. The suspense is amazing and it just keeps growing. I hope it reaches a climax as satisfying as the build up