Here I thought I had already written a review. I mean, even if I did, I'd not have much to say. This novel is just the best, period. The writing, the characters, their interactions are all so amazing and intriguing that it keeps drawing you in in. Well, and there's the father who left for milk... Although as of now, the stability of updates is a bit questionable, I'm willing to forgive the author for that. Overall, just an amazing novel.
At first when I started reading the novel, I liked it. But slowly as time passed, I started finding reading the novel a chore. There's too much information going on with every single side plot or history being explained with a chapter. A whole chapter is based on a few enemies escaping from the good guys. There's too much info that it's frying my brain. Every chapter, something or the other is described and half the chapter is wasted with little to no plot progress. There's multiple back to back chapters wasted on the MC just talking and having fun with his friends when the main plotline is going on in the background with the side characters. After this, another few chapters with what the side characters did. The first few chapter is called "last week as a judge" or something, but the first day of the week ends only after chapter 80 or something. Every case the MC takes on is explained with a few dozen chapters. Till now there is no idea what the MC is gonna do. There is nothing to suggest what the future holds. Just taking cases and lazing around. I couldn't read it after chapter 80 or something because it's too boring without a proper plot progress. The chapters are long, which I like, but there's little progress in each chapter with the rest being info dumps. So by now, I've read around 80-90 chapters and nothing has happened. And the MC just seems too bland for me. He's the absolutely shameless type with no trace of dignity or pride. This just beats the essence of a cultivation novel. The writing is good. The world background is well explained. Too detailed if you ask me, which just takes away the beauty of the novel. As always, the MC friends are all the weirdos, and the weirdo friend group always turns out to be the OP group, just like in black clover. Overused trope. And as I said, the story development is too slow. Snails pace with too much info dumping in each chapter.My opinion is that if you're a patient person, give it a read. It's a good novel with good writing, but not my cup of tea. Perhaps after chapter 100 or 150 it'll get better. It's obvious that the author has taken immense effort to write it, and props to him. It's visible to everyone. Good work on the novel author. I'm sorry but it's just not for me. I wish you success.
it's kind of interesting more chapters please
Ok so I’ve been caught up on 2 other of authors books and honestly this is my favorite one. You’ve progressed do much as a writer and the characters feel way more real here rather than wish fulfillment fillers. If everyone can match the main wife and be developed this could be very popular. Take this as more as a slice of life with a deeper main plot.
I love the fact it just pops like you can never know completely if it will conti from the previos chapter or go into a different story
I think you could improve a bit by looking at other people's writing and then comparing your weak spots to their strong points. But anyways, please make the mc have a lightning fire quirk, so that endeavour is licking his boots and also that he meets deku and bakugo early on.
It's good start, hope author not drop it bcs I like this kind of novel, like stronghold in the apocalypse, but it's shame author most likely drop it
For the person who picked up this book thank soooo much. I am so happy someone picked it up as I though it would be buried forever. Thank you. Once again I give my gratitude to you for being a special human being and apricciating this novel's worth.
This novel has too much wish fulfillment. Jumping from high-school level knowledge to college professor level in all subjects with max stats completely takes any meaningful development out of the story.
I learned that the setting of this novel is supposed to be China not America. That removes any stars I would have had for translation quality. The American setting is ridiculous as the actual content doesn't match up with the supposed American setting.
I recommend reading "Advanced Scholars Technological System" instead if you are interesting in a system based learning novel that slowly progresses into advanced technology instead of handing everything to the MC.
Its very hard to find a good non-human webnovel with smart MC...Thank you author...9/10
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This is a unique novel.
I believe you guys understand it by reading it's description.
I suggest it to both Old and New reader.
I hope
Fed up with those cliche cultivation novels?
Try read this one, story really god, it's like siscon chat grup but if siscon 10/10 then this one 777/10
Not much of cliche (not yet)
Stupid arrogant young master (not yet)
It's easy going cultivation novel with not much cliche and nonsense plot twist
The minus only the release and the length of every chapters
Regardless, keep it up author.
U had a potential.