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racism,only racism, this novel tells us that Japan is one of the the worst place to live and It also compares China and it is the best in everything.
it has great potential but there are some things that are just stupid
why this novel is bad
1 abilities are op when they are just common example: an archer goblin has a skill that makes you invisible If you are still and not breathing I said why it is op in a paragraph comment when it got introduced(it basically is perfect for ambush hiding and confusing your enemy)
archer goblins have a skill called archers reinforcement or something it gives an enchantment to ALL weapons not only bows all weapons
a sage has a skill that shows every living being in 100 meters ( it hard counters assassin's with stealth making them useless and remember this is a common skill and there are like 5 more ranks)
2 the mc can hit small targets from a distance with a bow without missing when it's the first time that he uses one ( he doesn't have any skills that help with aiming or stats that help yet)
the same with a sword he became an expert with 1 hour of experience
3 I found an exploit
Read till Chapter 85Words cant express the greatness of this novel (i dont know how to write reviews)MC is an nascent soul stage expert and is one of the powerhouses in his kingdom His system lets him advance in his cultivation as his apprentices reach higher realm OH IMPORTANT POINT the mc still cultivates normally even though he has a system Our MC also has a mysterious background as his memories area hazy Yea yea i know my review is bad just give this novel a shot and i am sure you i will love it
read 4 chapters and the grammar is extremely bad, can hardly understand anything that's happening because there are grammar mistakes literally everywhere, and yet he begs for golden tickets in the beggining, from the good reviews I've seen about flowing grammar and writing structure, I can tell he 1. deletes reviews or 2. writes his own reviews with different accounts, I cannot stress enough about how awful the grammar is, the story so far and how it's conveyed is great and character's feel like they have personality already... but the grammar ruins it all
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Hello I want to say that I really like this book and I can’t wait to see where the story goes! I also like how the Mold is very possessive over Miranda and I don’t really want to see It be completely destroyed. I like how it has its own personality. I think it would be cool for them to somehow work together, anyway the story so far is really cool! Can’t wait to read more!
Although the idea originates from other similar novels. But it has its unique story. Instead of helping the original protagonist or making the original protagonist talented. This novels starts with the original hero as a weak person. An interesting read. Looking forward to the updates.
You had me near crying by just reading the synopsis. what more else the whole story? this is absolutely amazing. you can feel the emotions raging. and ohohoho angst, I love angst. keep up the good work!
A new take on MHA fanfic with not starting as a kid and studying heroics. The premise is good and the path is promising. I just read the first chapter, but I couldn't stand the grammar, so for now I will only rate it 3 star. I hope the author will find a good editor since the story has huge potential. I will come back and rate it higher once this story is edited well. Cheers!
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I don't understand how people could give this novel such a high rating, Did they delete 1-star reviews and added some fake 5-star ones?? Or did they rate summary at pilot read? It's also a butchered novel with westernized names. I wonder if the other two highly trial read novels are the same.. will check in a moment.. Before this I had fun reading "Protect Our Patriarch", a family clan building novel, And before that, "Museum of Deadly Beasts" is a solid recommendation except the weak cliche beginning.