I lost interest. Some stuff were just not being addressed and it leaves off in a unsatisfied way. The battles and fights were lacking dialogue. Not enough back to back confrontation with enemies and the lack of being on the edge my sit reading, it was really bland. Mc didn’t struggle; barely fighting the majority of what I’ve read and I’m at 137 chapters, too much dialogue and details on skills and books. I feel like what I was reading was good but majority of it was mediocre. it was trying to be really good but it just was lacking to me. And I get attached to characters so when he left the book or world he was in and I know for sure the characters there he was never gonna meet again is kinda sad. But I understand that’s the premise of the novel I expected to dislike that part of this novel when I came to read it. But I was expecting other things to be top notch. 7.5/10. Good luck author it was a decent read.
I liked the start of the story, however, the latest chapters have been boring and lifeless. The main character has multiple issues, the guy doesn't feel like a human at, more like a robot, and has no personality. His girlfriend loses their baby due to a miscarriage. The guy doesn't care at all, doesn't even visit her once.
I need next chapter so fast because i like this novel ...i so suprised very good character and personality...i think next chapter many fight with demon lord and archdemon ..vs lord Leon dragonia Lion heart with spinner
excellent writing. well thought of story with much potential.. down side. author drags out every single thing into multiple chapters made it to chapter 18 before the excessive details and filler paragraphs finally did me in. if you are very very very patient it might be a great read
Love this book and realy love the authors profile pic. definitely a book to read. love the fact that their is no harem and the system is nice to.
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If you have any questions regarding the story I would try and answer them in the replies of this review.
Now to the review. It's hard to assess your, own work. I won't give myself all five starts for everything and think that I'm the best. I'm not confident in my writing skill, but I hope that it's on the average level. I won't be able to update the novel frequently and write more than three chapters a week because of my work. Right now this is a hobby. The story development, characters, worldbuilding, all may be unnecessarily slow-paced or written without appropriate attention.
Yet I hope that someone would find this story attractive and enjoyable.
I don't need powerstones, if you want, you can spend them on a more deserving novel. I don't need hollow five-star reviews that don't describe the novel, but I would appreciate any, review, even one-star. As long as it describes what and where I should change and improve, ups and downs of this story.
Overall a good novel but it is just chaotic and you can't follow the reasoning slowly. all i could say its a pretty solid story line with a good background story
I like it but its just Somtimes confusing to me
One of the best if not the best novel in its genre.
Just read it trust me it's fucking awesome!!!
Stop reading this review and go read the novel!!!
This story is all over the place and the writing quality is low, impossible to get immersed in. Its basically explanations galore and him grinding pills, tool refining and talismans. Anything interesting is just glossed over for more info dumps. Characters are just there and the mc is ur usual cultivation mc. The whole video game thing is also too far fetched and forced.
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man when I saw that it was cancelled I was very sad, but now it's back and once again I highly recommend you give this a try, I love everything, the fights, the dialogue, the characters, and the occasional detailed parts.
in summary read it, it good, yes