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I really like the story and how it progresses. I have just discovered it recently, but please keep up the good work! I am looking forward to the next chapters! ?
I’ll be honest I have been generous is my rating. But i want to support this novel as I find it much better then many others. I like the story, I like the fact the MC is not bloodthirty since the start and has flaws, and I like how the theory of the word has been well though.What I think that needs to be improved. Generaly the english (for a non-native) is better than many novel out there, but some passage miss a verb or we go from present to using past and it makes the reading a bit complicated. In addition the explainations of the world theory are sometimes confusing wich is sad as we can guess the author put a lot of efforts in it.The plot is a bit forced and the swich to different point of view/secondary characters without a clear introduction or cut makes the reading sometimes very difficult (but still the story is better than many out there!)The only thing that really makes me furous is to see how cluless the MC is of the world outside. I know he is a dropout but still he must has been exposed at school or home in is pre-teens to all the magical parts of his world ... right now it feels he is as clueless as the reader regarding magic wich is in my point of view absolutely not normal and possible. This makes the MC looks stupid sometimes and I found it irritating.Keep going author! Writing is not easy! I wish your success.
Exceptionally Intriguing and Beautifully Written so far. Looking forward to him evolving with the Holy blood physic as well as mastering more of Master Bahun's skills
Well honestly the story was good. It has some interesting things if you know what I mean. I only gave this a 3.8 because of CCCRP ( common chinese cliche romance plot ) scene where the fl separates with mc cuz she got some unique physique like IJPDYB (Ice Jade Phoenix Divine Yin Physique /Body ) which attracted a SEOIV ( Supreme Elder Of Ice Valley) when she was 'coincidentally' passing by. This novel would have been perfect if not for this CCCRP. Anyway its only an opinion from my perspective so if you have no problem with this CCCRP then give this a try
The story is highly influenced by anime and I'm loving it so much, already added to my collection btw. Though the world where the protagonist dwells in is a bit vague along with a few characters such as the parents and friends, the story largely focuses on the main character's psychopathic narratives about his grand scheme which is well-done. No flaws in grammar nor vocabulary but the author has so much room to improve in stuff like worldbuilding or a more organic dialogue between the characters. I don't usually get hyped about new stories but I see a lot of potential in this one because it's anime and psychopaths.Keep up the good work, Author-san!!! ʕ•ﻌ•ʔ
How can this be not good? The rating stars should be millions??✨️
I first found this book when it was free for 24 hours. The first 5 chapters were pretty ok, they were introducing the character and the system, as well as some details about the world. It also highlighted the beginning of his adventure towards power, his goals and motivations, which was great. It starts going down hill when he meets the boar orc, the second rare grade creature. At one point in the story it says that ordinary objects can't harm these beast and then he ends up killing the monster with a tree. I also have to mention that the fight scenes are pretty poorly described, I'm never able to get a picture of what's going on, I was only able to glean that he fought, got somewhat hurt and in the end somehow killed it with a tree. There are also some parts that I find really ridiculous, like when for some reason he feels the need to con someone who cared about him or the fact that a character just blurts out all his thoughts and worries to someone he deems a stranger. In reality people don't just blurt out the whole truth of their problems to others who they meet for the first time, at most they would give a vague outline of what's wrong. The character is also pretty dumb, at one point he goes on a tirade about how despicable others hiding information about their powers is, when he's also going to end up doing the exact same thing, it's kind of common sense to keep important information to yourself. Overall, the concept and beginning is good, it's just... everything else that's not great. Too many inconsistencies and nonsense.
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This is going great till now. I'm enjoying the story. It is building interest in me now to read further. Sitting in train and reading this in silence is better with a cutting chai. And I'm enjoying it now ?
The Title itself seems so interesting.. I am a new reader and just started reading it but this seems to be so interesting that I am literally hooked to this book.. Would love to get more and more such chapters.. Hope you get many more successful chapters and definitely new novels.. Have a great year ahead..