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it has excessive, extreme and abusive nationalism when you cross 60+ chapters. it also turns totally gloomy after that......................................................
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I’m really enjoying the story so far. I haven’t heard of a sadistic system so far so this is originally for me. I like the take your doing with the story and can’t wait for more. The only bad said for me as a fluent English speaker is that the grammar is pretty bad. As long as the improve upon that or get someone to proof read then it should be all good. Best wishes from a new fan and hope to see the story continue ??????
Too much grammatical mistakes, most of the time you won't able to differentiate who he's referring to......And damn energy really...what is this, you combined soul energy and mana and was too lazy to name it and thus it became damn energy...like literally,try to be a little more innovative...?
Hello, Editor for this series here :3First things first, there probably isn't going to be any additional summary any time soon, so I'm going to write a few words about the novel.First, let's discuss the score. TL Quality and Update Stability... duh, of course it's 5 ^^ Well, to be honest, having read barely a few dozen chapters, it's too hard to say whether it's going to be good or awesome but the fact that the author didn't screw up at the beginning and did rather well is already quite good.So, let me say a few worlds about the story. The premise is that we have an average (more or less) guy who gets (not right away at the beginning though) an opportunity to become a cultivator. As the story is written by a woman, our male protagonist doesn't really resemble the arrogant Xianxia MCs (at least not yet), and feels more real, though the contrast may be a bit too big. Also, there is at least one love interest who seems like she'll stay in the spotlight as someone equal to MC instead of being shelved such as most male authors do, but it's too early to say whether it will be harem, love ******** or single love interest novel yet (my guess is that it isn't going to be harem). Generally speaking, at least so far, the characters aren't 1-dimensional and the author does a good job dealing with some annoying tropes common in Xianxia, perhaps because she's female and isn't (as) contaminated by those garbage tropes.Also, some may think that having a female author may be a drawback, but I assure that it's a normal story for male (or any) audience. It's definitely different, both the story and the writing style, but it doesn't get in the way of reading at all. Perhaps the only drawback would be the info dumps, but they're rare (I can recall something like three, four chapters--not whole chapters, either--out of sixty) and so far never repeated. As for the plot itself, it's still to early to tell since the author didn't reveal much yet at the point when I'm reading, but looks promising. Not sure what else to write about so I'll keep it at this. Oh, I'll just mention that the pace of the story doesn't seem to be too fast, but neither is it very slow.
Alright, let's not look at the narcissist rating I gave to my novel, but get to the main topic. I am re-writing this novel. The previous time I wrote it, I took a big break in the middle and in that break I thought of various ideas and stuff and finally, when I came back, I thought of rewriting all of it. If you are new to this novel, I can assure you that you will have a great time reading this and won't be disappointed.
the idea is unique...even though I haven't read the novel..but who cares...every review is saying this...hope this picked **. .
Great story eagerly waiting for the story to be completed. love the characters and their roles can't wait for the end. Thumbs up to the writer
This novel started quite good however it ended. The author abandoned this novel so there is nothing to read here anymore.Hope you find another read.
Not another one of them demon king novels again! Demon king this, demon king that. Reasons to read this novel:NoneReasons not to read the novel:Aplenty I hereby rest my case
Another story that's hard to read, with another idiotic and pathetic MC, no backbone and the story said he was intelligent and had the best grades and such, but he just seems like a moron, so conflicting,whoever wrote this should pay attention to what there writing, how do you not realize how conflicting your story your writing is, its actually sad really.