I’ll start my review of this novel by saying outright that Pancakes is my favorite author on webnovel, and I throughly enjoy their novels, so there may be some inherent bias in my review. And everything written below is personal opinion. I have currently read up to chapter 132, and really enjoy this novel as it differs from Pancakes other works like Epic of Caterpillar, DQR, and World Traveling. I really enjoy the balance of slice of life elements that are vital to the understanding of the MC Elayne and the other supporting characters like her daughter Elena, friend Rika and others. Mixed in with the action elements that occur through the VRMMO that is the key element of this story. The main reason that our MC started to play is quite admirable as she wishes to get closer to her daughter after passing of her husband 5 years ago. None of the characters so far feel one dimensional or flat and each adds a unique aspect to the world building and overall story. While some readers may question certain relations between characters I found overall that the characters are very well thought out. The world building in this novel has been developing at a steady pace throughout, both in elements of the “real world” and BNLO VRMMO world. Pancakes has an extremely firm grasp on mythological and fantasy elements as seen throughout their writing and other novels. The hinted possible fusion of the “game” and “reality” hints to more elements to be revealed about the world and universe at large that Pancakes has constructed in their other novels. While having read the other novels provides more insight into these foreshadowing elements it is not require at all in order to understand and enjoy this novel. The pacing of this story may seem slow to those that enjoy quick paced and action packed stories. The slower pace of this novel really fits the characters and the world in my opinion. As I mentioned earlier the slice of life elements and action come together to form in my opinion a cohesive plot line. Pancakes has great update stability, and in my time as a reader of theirs I cannot remember a time that they missed an update ever. In terms of writing quality grammatical errors are few and quite rare, however my own grammatical knowledge isn’t the greatest. Give the novel a try!
Im on chapter 19 so far so good .
I have a feeling author sama is building up a solid foundation for this story ,and that the story will end up top 20 in future. No alot of background of the world but time will make things clear. Also a discord would be nice(hint) .
I very much enjoy reading every single chapter of this novel.
If I had to point out why I'm enjoying it that much, I'd reply "D&D".
The world building, character design/development and the FEEL just reminds me of an awsome D&D session headed by an awsome DM.
If you are looking for a novel with great but oftentimes dark humour, like a violently intelligent MC who, although with prior experience, has a snake's outlook on human society and just overall enjoy stories based on a party rather than an individual,
YOU MUST READ THIS.
Soccer novels are great! Systems that aren't completely ridiculous are great! Fun novel in general. (Word filler word filler word filler word filler word filler word filler)
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overall good need further chapter to find out how awesome it is..........................hopefully it will keep up the quality and introduce new elements
I have loved it, I hope it is chosenfor translation................................................................Exp.exp.xp.xp.xp........................................
Haha I really liked the novel, I hope the author continues :3++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++
I hope there can continue the story, I look forward to the continuation of the story, the story is interesting background MCs and their families make me curious, the world outside the village is waiting
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Character is good, with their own flaws. From my first impression, Zick is my favorite character followed by his older brother. The plot is interesting so far. While world-building is a bit vague... just a bit. OVERALL GOOD STUFF!