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The novel is good and i only have two problems with it...the MC is very passive and isn't like a man at all and the FL is too pushy and I understand that its because of the fact that the FL's family has more power but the MC is too passive...he lets all the things happen to him and doesn't do anything about it.....form what I read from the replies to the other reviews I know there is a good reason but i think its being pushed a bit too far so I feel like making the MC more bold and manly and the FL less bold and pushy. Other than this, the novel is very nice.
I say we give this a try as its sort of new, I guess?----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
The intro is very well thought of and so is the protagonist. The story has quite a smooth flow, so well done that. Just a suggestion, it might be a good idea to put a TW before talking about suicide as it is quite a sensitive topic.
I shall give this one star to counter all 5 star reviews without stating reason.Lalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalala
Writing Quality- 5/5.01Update Stability- 5/5Story Development- 5/5Character Design- 10/10World Building- 10/10 This Novel Is Such A Wonder From The Bonk
Plot - 100%World-building - 150%Writing - 200%Characters - 250%Overall it is an awesome story that has a blend of transmigration, fantasy, and dragon(of course, the story would be boring without a dragon). Do give this story a try to get a different touch of fantasy with system...
Where do I begin? I started this book when I saw it had 158 chapters. This literally became my favorite Omegaverse book of all time. The reason being is that there is so mich chravter development. Relationships are not perfect and people are not either. This shows the growth of the characters - both ups and downs. My favorite relationship is by far Lee and Dexter! I did not pay it that much attention initially. I went back and re- read their entire relationship specifically. The author does a fantastic job of putting hidden clues/ foreShadowing/ explanations WAY ahead of time. The only downside is the author ocassionally uses the wrong character name. You will know though who they are talking about and I think its fine personally since they don’t have a professioanly proof reader. If you are debating in reading this book - do it! You will be going on journey!
I honestly believe this is the best book on this platform. It’s constantly exhilarating and not repetitive in the slightest. The world building is literal insanity and the characters are really well made. Nothing ever feels 2D. Some of the side characters even feel like “other MCs.” Somehow though, it doesn’t detract from the MC in any way, shape, or form.
I don’t want to rant lest you skip the review and/or this absolute masterpiece. Read it.
The only downside of this book is that it may ruin all other webnovels for you. It sure did for me.
i tried reading but could not get past the first 10 chapters. Story itself is good, but bad English ruins experience. I could barely get into the story, every other paragraph, i had to re-read a sentence and correct it in my mind to make sense of it. Tenses are all over the places, sentence structures feel unnatural and painful to read.
this is a very fun read. the mc and the way he interacts with his kaijin or family is hilarious. the kaijins themselves are interesting to read about as well as how outsiders view the creation of them compared to what the mc is seeing. i look forward to seeing what other types of kaijins will pop up later on.
Look the story is interesting and all but please get somebody to proofread[img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins]