The translation feels super lazy, there are a ton of inconsistencies, especially the names of sects or moves, in one sentence, the name of a sect would be Paradise Palace, the immediate next sentence, they would change the name to Elysium Palace. This is not the only example, as this would happen all the time and is super immersion breaking.
To be honest, I don't even mind the characters and the world being one dimensional as that is the case for 80% of the translated novels nowadays, but I can't even continue to read this due to having to constantly try to figure out what the translations are saying.
My 2nd fav after Reverend Insanity.
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The story has a great cast of characters, and the plot continues to build with each new episode. Hats off to the author .You're doing an amazing job, Malcolm.
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I want more of this novel Some translation issurs but pretty minir and things ive seen before Hopefully this gEts picked up 140 is way too much
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The writing style is mature and well organized... I like how the author fleshed out his character and how they respond to situations in a realistic way. Just like how the author gave the MC a drive or purpose that will build his character along with the story. The world-building is well thought out and the pacing is neither slow nor fast... it's well balanced.
The character design and the frequent updates are a definitely good and the way he built the background for the world was good as well, the names are definitely better than what I've seen in most novels.
The concept of this novel is very unique compared to the other game novels.For now(ch 40) it looks quite interesting.I hope the author makes it more better in the future.
Heya everyone. This is my shameless review of this novel. The world of this novel is the same as that of A Demon's Journey. It's just situated in another kingdom. The main character of my previous novel will be shown, I just urge you to wait a bit.I am confident that you will love this story as well. Thank you.
Every word has a deep meaning. Very suspenseful sci-fi. I like this story. The author uses language that is quite easy for reader to understand. Fighting ?
This novel is interesting. The writing quality could improve but it doesn’t bother me too much. The story development hasn’t really gone anywhere as of yet but it’s only been six chapters. The character design is interesting, the world building isn’t different but that’s because it’s the real world. Overall this book has room for improvement and I’d suggest grammerly for little mistakes though it’s a very good read?