It looks like webnovel auto hides reviews with bad language in it? Had to change some stuff before it registered
Hey author. Sorry if this seems like a scathing review.
Seems? No, it is. This novel is so terr1ble, I wonder just how many review swaps you had to go through in order to get this rating. If you didn't do any review swaps, then congratulations, because this novel is so bad that you would have just done the impossible
Writing Quality: 2 stars. Each paragraph is over ten sentences long. Sentence flow is nonexistent. Cohesive dialogue? Never heard of it. There were several instances in a single chapter where the sentence count of a paragraph easily reached the thirties, sometimes even forties, in one huge infodump or the other. 2 stars
Stability of Updates: 2 stars. Don't get me wrong, the updates are consistent. Which is why I gave it two stars instead of one. This author piles ten chapters on the reader, every sixteen days. Imagine you, a reader, getting an update for this novel. You've forgotten the plot. You've forgotten the characters. You've moved onto other novels in your life. You don't want to experience reading through ten tedious chapters, sift through all the story pieces the author brings back in their terr1ble chapters. For more information on 'terr1ble', see the writing quality star rating. 2 stars for both.
Story Development: See if I care. You tell me. Try to read at least ten chapters of it. I'll pay you ten bucks to summarize the story for me. Tell me how much of your life you spent trying to decipher the author's page of infodump.
Character Design: 3 stars. Generic Medieval plot, hiding under a pretense of originality. But I don't have time to play house with it.
World Background: 2 stars. Infodump. Infodump. Infodump. Infodump. Infodump. Infodump. Infodump. Infodump. Infodump. Did I ever tell you that some sentences are over thirty sentences long? This novel's world, no, *any* novel's world isn't interesting enough for a reader to sit through a thirty sentence paragraph explaining the rinky-dink politics and intricacies of the world.
Before I get ripped a new one in the comments, I suggest this: Read it yourself. Whether you are the author or a reader, just read the novel. Get to chapter five, and take this quiz. What is the plot? Describe the characters. How fun was your read? It doesn't matter if you can do the first two. The answer to the last one is no.
And author, don't bother deleting this review.
Well, the only good thing about the story is that we finally have a mc Priest
As for everything else it's always the same, level up - meet people - be underestimated - be arrogant - amaze everyone - get fans or enemies - level up again. The typical story of rapid recycling.
Writing quality is good so I give it 5 stars and updates are 3 stars
Now I ask if they have any novels where the MC is like this and chooses the priest or paladin class, or even if the mc goes to an isekai and joins a religion to be a priest. I can't find anything like it and the most I watched is "Paladin of Asgard" and I didn't have a strong faith in the Holy Light either.
Really love this book so far! ❤ I love how the MCs personality is written, it's rare that a book has my favorite kind of MC. I also love the foreshadowing of the worlds, I think I know where it's leading & if I'm right it'll be awesome lol
I read another review that asked if it was dropped & you replied to say no, the book was just moving to a different platform. The reviewer asked what platform but you didn't reply. I understand that sharing what platform you're moving to on this one may seem a bit disrespectful but I & I'm sure others REALLY want to know what platform you're moving this novel to so we can keep reading! I already searched Google & didn't find anything! Please keep writing this epic story & let us know where to keep reading it! =^.^=
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Awesome! It has yuri, harem and cultivation. Can't go wrong with that combination. The writing quality is more than readable enough. Hope the author will keep up the good work.
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most cring book I've ever read and not that much on this app but I've read a but load of books................................................
Very dissapointing, trash tamer novels that get picked over actual quality...all your gona get is word count chapters, dragged story and sudden cliques.
Writing Quality seems to have improved from when I started his other book, updating stability is amazing, there’s only 5 chapters out so I can’t really comment on the others so just take 4
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