Another 4chaoter novel... Seriously, did you guys discuss with each other before agreeing to post only four chapter? Come on.... I can't give a good review apart from it give me the feel of "I thought the world is weak, but suddenly plot smack me in the face"...
Great story so far, grammar here in there is wonky but nothing to wild. Very intersted to learn more about our OP MC and his Harem. This should blow Up anyday now keep it up Author[img=recommend]
I've read the first chapter and I am getting some serious solo leveling vibes, I mean he is about to die and then like KABLAMO wanna be a fucking player.
This is one of those novels where you can only shake your head. Besides the open nationalism and suptle racism the major drawback of this novel is the authors desire to lengthen each scene as much as possible. At Chapter 20 we have not even started on the whole space travel thing and the only important development has been the MC taking a drug to permanently increase his IQ (of course the aothor does not know what that is, but it is a convenient tool to use, when you don't know how intelligence, pattern recognition and knowledge transfer actually work).
Character development is also way worse than it should be after 20 chapter without any story development. We know the MC is smart and a virgin, that is all. We don't even know his motivation for going to space, anything about his mother or why he dislikes most of his family. He does not appear to have any friends, besides one who is constantly trying to get him layed. He does not have any hobbies, besides his new thirst for knowledge.
What did he do before this? He was a student and went trough special training, that is all.
Fuck, this is not Sci-fi, this is slice of life gone wrong.
Do not read, do not support such practices which needlessly increase word count.
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Not a lot to say really. My constant comments on this book will serve as part of my review, plus I don't want to spoil it for anyone else.
Just imagine a perfectly crafted story with amazing world building, fun characters, and a growing plot. Anyone would love it to bits and it only took me a day to read through Volume 1 of the book.
Honestly a fun read that I'll keep enjoying after this review.
I have nothing to say other than it's AMAZING. Is it the Story progression? Cultivation levels? Weapons? Battle descriptions? MC's love life? Romance and Sex scenes? Suspense, Thrills and Mysteries? Basically everything in this novel is great.
Although there are minor writing errors here and there, the book is still very much entertaining.
Keep up the good work dear author. Don't stop writing. And don't forget to keep safe.
This book is so good that my thumbs are twitching from excitement to read the next chapters so I accidentally copy and pasted this over and over. This book is so good that my thumbs are twitching from excitement to read the next chapters so I accidentally copy and pasted this over and over. This book is so good that my thumbs are twitching from excitement to read the next chapters so I accidentally copy and pasted this over and over. This book is so good that my thumbs are twitching from excitement to read the next chapters so I accidentally copy and pasted this over and over.
I am loving it. The MC is just the type I like. The world building is good. The English is good with no grammar mistakes.... Just looking forward to a great novel with a bit OP MC who takes decision wisely and keeps a bit low-key.[img=update][img=recommend]
Right after chapter 40 everythings feels out of places it like my mind is having trouble processing the story it was too rush or poorly told
I'm confused. why animals and insects? I mean the MC should be able to transform into anyone. why is it limited to animals and insects it's a huge plot hole.