James_Piter
A sign-in novel where mc is not following virgin-Dao cause of his HANDsomeness.... I support getting this novel pick...................................
Hope this gets picked! Seems interesting and like a nice spin on sign in novels. Big plus is from the summary it looks like no racism, no giving the characters white names, and good vibes
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It's really cool, you have a fertile imagination, I feel like I'm watching a movie in the cinema. I really like that you made Rocky remember his life. I feel warm when he talks about his mother and sister
The “challenges” of the MC are a bit forced and the authors writing style info dumps loads of paragraphs that if you skip them, will mostly not affect your reading of the story.
Muy bueno
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Chapter 20.
Mc is a cringe Female Human simp.
That did go from a Military Person to Brainless teen.
And yes Mc is of course a chinese what else did I even expect from this
I'll be honest after reading books for years on Webnovel this is the first time in a long time that a story really dragged me in. The story is very well thought out and I really get a feel for the MC as a side character to the "Protagonist" he's oh so jealous of. I can't wait for the next chapter
The translation is horrible,the naming of the powers are just as bad overall it is a bad of not horrendous story and a failure as an author. Good luck boy ✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️ ciao.
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this review is just for qi shan...I don't know what was author thinking but this forced comedy ruined everything.
If you are not confident in a thing...dont do it because it ruins the fun. I thought mc was ruthless and wasn't someone who forgets to take revenge but nvm, when he had the change to take revenge on qi shan of 2 years of torture, she had done on the mc...what did he do? he behaved like a scardy cat even after system slave master contract. qi shan even said that she cant disobey his commands...oof so disappointing.
