I love this book. It's really interesting and kind of inspired me to work on an idea I've had floating about in my mind. The prologue catches your attention immediately, good work
Will there be romance?
****!
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read about 100 chs
have say the core concept of novel is great but sadly the writer sidelines it rather write 60-80% about how chi na no.1 or how it's culture is the greatest or the classic
ch ina being the victim in every case while rest of the world are the bad guys
and in most cases the relatives of the dea d are the typical ch inese people only caring about money they can gain from the dea d guy(truth about ch inese society nowdays)
do give it a try as gain the core concept of the novel is very enjoyable to read
hope they make similar versions of this just not like this one to increase their social credit scores but rather for the sake of writing a novel and focus more than people (cast) involved then shout CCP great
Interesting.
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im not really good at making reviews so all i got to say is this is one of the best concepts for a story and has one of my favorite main characters so far and i hope it gets the attention it deserves (yes im getting on my alts to review to show that i am sorry and hope it gets more people to read this)
if you newer reader maybe its fine but for veteran this novel is full cliché and bullsh&$*. the concept system maybe quite refreshing for beginning chap but later become too boring. full plot armor and dumb mc making this perfect just to waste time
The synopsis is very interesting. The story plot is great and the writing style is very well written. The updates are steady and the characters are developed pretty well in each chapter. I like female lead stories. Highly recommend it for reading. Keep up the good work, Author!
I have only read 31 chapters right now.
Writing quality is a 4 for me
Update stability a 5 for one chap per
day
For me, the synopsis does help with future events but the problem here is that the synopsis spoils too much of what happens. The author could just say she and not mention who those people are. Why? Because there are characters that fit the description of the lady and they are not even a player. Just from the 31 chapters I read, some groups fit the description of the betrayal (the black wings who torture him)and if the synopsis was vague on what group is going to betray him then it can create suspense. 5 for how the story is developing but 1 for the synopsis. And for me the synopsis affects the story development so it is a 3 star for Story Development.
I like the characters except for the black wings for me they are annoying. I don't get why there are people who hate the mc at the start(tbh the guy who rated this story 5 stars was the one whi complained) since it is reasonable he acts that way. Although he was, personally for me, too slow. So 3 stars
I like how they don't give too much of the background at the start(looks at stuck as a dungeon mob who dedicated the entire 3rd chapter for world-building in the perspective of a guy who dies in chapter 5). For me 5 stars
Ever wanted to read multiple novels at once? This novel is for you! The amount of inconsistencies and changes the author makes every chapter make it so every chapter is from a new novel! In fact, around chapter 20, the author even makes it a new novel with the doppelgänger skill!
Fun fact: The novel never describes what something looks like other than body size! You can imagine it however you want, what a great author it is! Why write in your own descriptions when the reader can imagine it for you! It was amazing, in one of the fights, a character transforms into a 'strength beast', then an 'agility beast'! The descriptive story telling perfectly describes the experience this novel provides! It's like the most beautiful, stunning, powerful head butt you could ever receive!
In case you are slow, and made it this far, this novel is terrible. Save your brain cells.
Really quality writing! Super impressed with this one; I havent spotted really any grammar or spelling mistakes so far - the story is really gripping. Also, I love Vampires!