Well as a book critique, I'll take my time to review this series.....well, it has a great start and I could feel the tension brewing. A few dialogue felt clichéd but it was still okay, at least above average. From your bio page, I can see that you guys are a team. So far, only Penultimate Ace and Penultimate Xoxo have been updating chapters. Ace's chapters are generally well described and fleshed out than Xoxo's chapters...his battle scenes are op....but they make a solid team. Can't wait to see Dama's chapters. I feel like this book has the potential to grow so far there's a stable update. You guys are doing well. I'll be back here to blast you if you relent. I expect stable updates. Let's keep moving.
This is a good novel, a hidden gem. The MC is cautious and actually thinks about the steps he makes. He isn't an arrogant fool, who will do irrational things based on his emotions. Instead he bides his time, and always ensure he makes the winning move.His system isn't too OP either. It's exactly as it presents itself, no extra sign-in nonsense, no lottery, no hidden reward. All it does is optimize techniques. Which is a decent cheat.The writing is a step above your normal original fic, and the MC seems to be a ruthless character willing to do anything for power with no remorse or scruples. One thing I would like to see more of in the novel however, is more interaction between the mc and the world/characters. For the most part mc is a hermit (which isn't bad).
ok ?? I am reading this till the end of the chaps
What A Book!, This novel reminds me of the game "Dragon City" haha, I hope there is a feature to combine the basic elements of dragons and create dragons with various elements!, And also I hope dragons from Chinese mythology really exist in this novel!!. Well there is my favorite dragon in the Dragon City game with the form of a dragon from Chinese mythology with the element of light named Cosmos!.
5 star for my SEA fellow lets go WWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW
So far the story is looking good waiting for how our female character will make her journey
Pertamax ??? Thanks for the Books!!!!! ? ??Oh, nobody have given a review for this yet? Let me be the first to give all five stars for all five categories for your new book ????? We are all looking forward for the next chapters ???
Just a generic review. It's 3.0 cuz idk the story but something has to be rated so here it is ig. Anyway, this word count thingy is very annoying I gotta say. Hopefully, this padding text will somewhat reach it but apparently this much is still not enough so here I am, typing.
Good start, interesting plot. but you should put a little though about your pacing and period placement. I hope you can keep up the story as well sharpening your skill. Story must be told.
This novel is very wonderful, I advise you to read it ??
I want to see Luo feng in other UniversesAs a servant at Fate Stay NightAs a cultivator in DoupoCanqion, Douluo Dalu, and other universe in W40k
I’m still very much enjoying this story and I’m looking forward to more~