Good, i like fujiu’s character, its rare to see a pretty smart brave and strong female lead in manhuas, and qin the male lead is not an asshole too, instead he is kind and caring, i hope there are many chinese comics like this in future
i smell something good here hehehe
Hello, once again author kun, just wondering if this is going on hiatus or smtg? cus you said it was only a three day break but it's already been 5...
this one is very very Bad and No Point in me telling you why exatly because Author will delete the comment Like the Others that pointed it out.
One of the worst novels I have ever read. The mc teams up with other people which although makes sense has much less pros compared to cons. Firstly, although it hasn’t been mentioned why the mc would wanna team up with them. But if we were to assume that the teaming up would have only one benefit that it would help prevent exposing his other pets. But at the same time he wouldn’t be able to level up his own pets. Secondly even though they are willing to share exp right now, what about future. Shouldn’t he rather try to level up his own pets. Also, the mc was focusing on leveling up only a single pet which also happens to be a weaker one, rather than trying to level up all of them which would be much more beneficial.
Author needs to keep better track of the stat and skill points and levels. There's very little world building and hard read for the speech.
I dont get it, why do people keep stealing the works of other people ???
Be a man and write your own story and dont steal the effort of other people!
Good and exciting development but need to be updated more frequently.
Thanks for the great work waiting for more updates
I am liking this story. it is the first light novel that i have read of this kind. i cant wait to read more chapter of this amazing author. i hope that she keep up the good work .
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Honestly, this is one of the best books that I've read in the last year. It has the potential to go for the distance and change the outlook on the average Eastern Fantasy novels on this App. It's written well and thought out very well, with the right amount of pace and not too much info that it confuse the reader. It gives them just the right amount of info and excitement that it leaves the reader wanting more Chapters to Read.
A really good original novel that you won’t regret giving a read. Writing Quality - Not much to say about this because there are rarely any obvious mistakes I can pickup on.Stability of Updates - There are regular updates (Though, there are never enough chapters when you really enjoy a story).Story Development - I like the current development of the story and you can tell the author is either well read or has done some research into the current specifics of the story. I would like to have a closer look at the actual system and the main uses of it for the MC, because at the moment the most important aspects I can think of are the map and crafting. It feels like he has been neglecting his responsibilities as a Lord in his own territories and I would like to see his making better use and giving a better look into the running of his current lands. With all the statistics available from the system I would think that he could create some medium long and easy to understand plans?Character Design - The character designs for the people that matter are well thought out. Even some side characters and the general attitudes of the nobles proves enlightening. The only thing that irritates me at times is the Main Character and his many tangents. Though, I suspect that is a design of the author on purpose. It just seems like the MC likes to jump from one thing to the next like an excited child and not being able to wait to show his efforts to all the people (Yet having nothing physical to show for that idea yet)World Background - The general lay of the world is proving to be well written. I’m not particularly well informed on polish geography and what has been established is well done, It would prove useful for the author to at some point once the MC has a stable land ownership to creat a map with the different colour coding to show who owns what (I find it helps with visualisation).Overal, a fantastic piece of work.