so stupid
This is such a good warhammer40k fanfiction keep going
This one's a W, please don't drop there aren't many novels like this....................
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The story is off to a great start, and the characters are well-written. I love the content of the story, and I am excited to keep reading! Good job!
I just read the entire story in one sitting its so good and first cricket fanfiction that I read, writing is also very good but I seriously hope this story isn't dropped, author please continue your story
I'm sad about the fact that I found this novel when it has so few chapters. The last Novel I enjoyed this much was ISSTH from Er Gen. They are completly different but exiting to read. As a pervert myself I found myself cheering for the MC. The best part up until now was *SPOILER* making his future father in law a cuck *SPOILER END*. The grammar is also pretty good. I'm realy thankfull for publishing your work.
cycle of repetitive and predictive plot, no surprises, he will be humiliated, get stronger, comeback to face slap his previous enemies. .. . only the first few chapters are worth reading, the rest is full of repitive cycle. No sect values
I love this novel compared to BTTH and WDQK for 1 sole reason...
SOLE REASON: This novel has no HAREM tag on it.
I love BTTH and WDQK but I stopped reading them halfway 'cause I found out they ended up having two wives. Although, somehow, its out responsibility, I still don't want it! I just want the MC to stick to only 1 girl. I would prefer the MC to just die alone than having a threesome. Lol. I'm a girl and I want a good romance. And this novel has it like the Dalou Series.
But, I still can't help feeling anxious. I hope the author won't betray me in the end. haha. I don't know what to do if it happens. I think I'm just gonna throw my phone and broke it out of frustration. LOL
**. I would have given this a 5 stars if not for the slow updates.
The logic is not strong with this one. Author jacks up common sense to force the character into cliche situations that don’t make sense. Sounds like whenever the author reads a cliche situation, then they feel obligated to include it in their story without any buildup or regardless of it making sense in the novel. 5/5 for stable releease, 1/5 for everything else. Wish i could give a 10/5 for overusing plot armor
Pretty good for a trial read. MC is smartly using his cheat to get stronger without making it too obvious. His increase in strength will be noticed, but no one has caught onto his immortality.
Only 15chapters so far, but this one will do well so long as they don’t introduce a bunch of messy harem relationships. Just increase your strength and beat the Villain behind the ghosts MC!!
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Probably the best webnovel i have read on this site, wish it would start updating again tho.
Best novel i have read in a long time with a proper storyline, no major plotholes or other stuff like that