I'm loving this story! I usually don't read stories like this, but it has me hooked from the first chapter! Great work!! The writing quality is great!
Very good book. I was looking for a book with an MC who created a gang and I found this absolute gem of a book. The MC's system is not super OP but it does give quite a big edge compared to other people. I personally don't like it when the MC's cheats are too OP because then there wouldn't be much of a story to write. Characters are all properly fleshed out and their personalities are all able to be distinguished easily. The story goes forward quite quickly as well but not so fast that there is no connection formed between us, the readers, and the characters in the book. Writing quality is very good, not many mistakes and the sentences flow smoothly. Any mistakes that are actually there are minimal and can be ignored. So all in all, recommend this book very much
Geat not like the others who are murder hobos he even repays his debts, he doesn’t stopp willy nilly even if he does still he will compensate the person, he is also smarter making like having an actual disguise so should actually read good novel 4/5 in my books
The adventure pretty fun. There no voting xe
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hidden gem cultivation story; everyone that likes cultivation novels will love this one. This story has a slower much gentler pace which lets you understand the mc and his personality more which i really appreciate especially because most stories on webnovel are rather fast paced and only describe situations on the surface level.Definitely give this novel a try!!!!
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Too many useless side character fight and the mc is not participate in it. So many chapter without an increase in mc strenght making it a bit boring for me personally
Great. One of the best military novels i have read so far. There is an alien tag, so i can surmise that there might be alien invasion or whatnot in the future chapters. I love your book, keep writing.
I've read up to chapter 400 so far and I would say this story is ok at best. The author goes into a lot of detail with describing the things the MC is doing while crafting, which at the start I thought was good and even necessary to sort of lay the foundation and give the reader a better understanding of what was happening, as well as visualize the crating process. What I didn't like is that the author continues to write about crafting in great detail like this for the rest of the story. Now there's nothing wrong with the crafting aspects in these kind of stories, in fact I enjoy the crafting parts a lot. The problem is there is not enough action/adventure or story development taking place to balance out the crafting aspect and it gets tiresome to read.
The beginning of the story was decent as the MC first enters the game prior to its official release and reaches his first town where he begins crafting in the various styles like smithing, leather working, tailoring, alchemy etc. This goes on for a few dozen chapters, and just when it's starting to get boring, the MC leaves the first town and starts traveling. Then the story picks up a bit and gets more interesting for a little while, until the MC goes to sea to reach some islands. At this point the pacing of the story takes a dramatic plunge and is almost completely focused on crafting during the voyage with only a few plot developments for about 150 chapters, and became painful to read. After the MC finally reaches the islands the story starts gets interesting again for a little while, before falling right back into monotonous crafting. As for the MC's life irl, most of it I found boring, unnecessary, and during one part, even offensive. I was holding out, hoping the story would get better after other players started entering the game, but by chapter 400 the game hasn't even been opened to the public yet, and I'm probably going to drop this. For some, this might be a good story, but it just didn't suit my tastes. If you're looking for a good story with the right balance of action/adventure, story development, and crafting, I would highly suggest reading "Overgeared" instead of this.
One of the better written stories written in its genre.
Positives
1) Solid MC, who readers can related to on a human level.
2) Good side characters that are interesting and bring more to the story
3) Cute Sister who really helps drive the story, while also giving agency for the MC
4) Interesting World, and world building.
5) Cool battle and fights scenes, and nothing to over top.
6) Bad guys actually make sense, and some cool villans throughout the series.
I was sad when this was originally dropped by the first TLer. Hope this catches up soon GL and bless the new/current TL team.
Now all I want is someone to pick up Pursuing Immorality, and bring back the masterpiece...
I'll just say this, you won't regret reading this.
I have been following this story for a long time, around the time this story was still being written and had around 200-300 chapters.
It's an amazing book with extensive system, cultivation, the plot is quite logical and not really forced.
The MC grows in this world of emerging extraordinary, but his sight was never just this small groups of people, no he looks much higher, high into the sky.