While the concept is solid, the story itself needs a lot of work. It's something of a Wattpad quality, which should tell more than a thousand words.
Okay so let me just say this one moment absolutely wrecked me. Nie Qinghe finishing those shoes for her brother Nie Dali—her first pair ever made specifically for him, not for Song Qingyuan—hit me like a truck. The original owner of this body spent years sewing for the guy she loved while her own brother carried water and did all the heavy lifting. And now? Now she's stitching with locked seams, making sure they'll last years, because he DESERVES it. That's not just character development, that's a whole personality transplant happening in real time. And the Song women? Mother Song and Eldest Aunt Song sitting there cracking sunflower seeds like it's no big deal while they plot to essentially destroy a girl's life? The contrast is brutal. Eldest Aunt Song literally suggests sending Nie Qinghe to the capital as a concubine like it's a business transaction. And Mother Song—oh, Mother Song is the scary one. She's the one who came up with the scheme to keep Nie Qinghe busy with needlework so she has no time to pester Qingyuan. That's not just manipulation, that's cold, calculated psychological warfare disguised as maternal concern. But what really gets me is how Nie Qinghe's relationship with her family shifts. She's never felt this kind of warmth before—her brother visiting her twice while she was sick, her mother worrying about her eating enough. The original owner was so consumed by Song Qingyuan she never noticed any of it. Now Nie Qinghe sees everything clearly and it's both beautiful and heartbreaking. She's determined to make them wealthy, to give her mother gold and silver, and honestly? I believe she'll do it.
The story was very hooking and it made me on edge of my seat. This novel was standard for me so nothing I can critisize much. The Main character was very strong and was dealing his problem with such courage. Making me attached to him and admire him. Nice setup! I hope you win the contest and get an entry on becoming a movie! Kudos!
I don't know what to say, but I'm sure of one thing, the story feels amazingly forced to the point where the mc is literally telling the exact dialogues he had in a conversation with someone to a third person. The abilities are also explained in a similar fashion. So, no thanks I just can't bear it, if other people can bear it, they might appreciate the mystery maybe, though those mysteries also feel forced.
So good how can u pass up a LN like this this author is on c- fire like man so good it’s sad it’s on the shadows of other books…Btw how I’m I still not on the top 10? I don’ get the point systemt of this app
Author-san I believe in u! please give us more Chapters? The sorry us so good and is building up for something great, I understand life gets in he way but please don't leave us waiting for long ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
The human interaction is just a bit too forced and unrealistic, the author tries to push a forgiving naruto-esque kind of MC which is calm but it’s too rushed and it interrupts the immersion. I mean i threaten to kill you and insult the one family member you ever had and you forgive me in a jiffy? Not saying the MC has to be vengeful but at least make it realistic, drag it out a bit, hint at it initially and carefully build up to it rather than lazily skip to that point all of a sudden. We’re all humans and it makes no sense cause even the best of people would find it difficult to forgive that easily. Storyline seems good and your writing isn’t bad either but the MC keeps ruining the immersion. Good luck on your story mate✌?
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SHAMELESS AUTHOR REVIEW!!!what can i do man, i am my own biggest fan, gotta do it lul. thanks for checking out my book though, i appreciate it very much. an even bigger THANK YOU if you actually read it too haha. take care, see ya around!
Cheap copy of I'm Actually a Cultivation Bigshot. Too rushed. And tiresome story.
I think this novel has potential (idk what you guys think about it) , and this is my second favorite among the six new trial read. Only I Am A Necromancer is my first, korean novels are good.Also. Qidian, please change the name in the cover, it says Fiend but it's supposed to be Demon. That's all.
oh , this one has a interesting description . It sounds like this : I'm in a cave but I still become the strongest ?✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨