I have been reading this story since it first showed up on the platform (Webnovel ). I have been hooked since the beginning .
Garbage, in general this book just sucks, the logic of this book is stupid. Do not recommend reading
free review) why not?)I am pleased how event goes
While the story is interesting and the premise is good, it has very little editing which makes it difficult to read. Additionally, while the author does take feedback, which is easy to notice after reading 200+ chapters, the older chapter are a mess and require significant rewrite.Essentially, while there is definitely improvement in the writing style, there are very few people that will be able to reach that point before giving up, which is the main reason this story will never see the top lists.For example, the other switches between story-lines between several chapters and you lose focus on their main character, while being forced to focus on characters the readers just aren't able to connect with because they disappear within a few chapter and have very little connection to the main story. While it was fixed, it still remains as a part of the story and is very difficult to gloss over. The only advise I can give to the author a complete rewrite for the first 200 chapters with serious editing and removal of filler chapters.
Alpha here!This story is interesting and gripping from the first few paragraphs. I am a huge fan of the isekai genre, and reading this plays an anime in my head! Seven did an amazing job of illustrating the scenes with his word play. Also everyone’s favorite plot device Truck Kun makes an appearance!Definitely give this Novel a try if you like isekai storys! Now shower Seven with powerstones and collections! Have them rain from the skys above!
I only gave this one a try because I have loved every story the author has written so far. And this one is has me hooked too! Can't wait for more chapters. Good work, Fate!
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Great start author!Highly recommended this book, the story flows well and the descriptions are innovative and creative.Characters are likeable and humorous.Keep up the hard work author!
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i want to be shameless but its really difficult so im giving my work a 5 star rating although i would like it 10 stars but no matter what i do i cannot and webnovel wont allow such a hypocritical post.
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