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I have not much to say about this novel. Maybe the fact that i disliked most of it would suffice?
Takes back memories..... from the 60-80 chapter's free from 2018 to the 20 free chapters of 2021... Webnovel sure upgraded in the very worst way
Unique story, however, early romance ruins it. Doesn't even have the romance tag. Also don't like childish mcs, when they're actually adults.
Just an examination of the writer's style.
There's a frequent lack or overuse of punctuation that makes sentences flow awkwardly.
The author's sentence structuring and wording, in general, can also create a strange read at times.
However, grammatical errors are minimal, and to give credit where credit's due, the Author has an exceptional vocabulary and word sense.
This prevents them from overdoing one of my biggest irks with novels on the site, rapidly overusing the same words in a small area of text.
An example of what I mean would be, "The other boys were going to attack but the leader stood up gesturing to not attack." This example was ripped straight out of a fairly popular novel.
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Good writing quality, but there are a few grammar mistakes, the story is good I like it, just hope he won't get arrogant and wonder what happens if he gets his draconic bloodline too. I like the character so far, just hope he will be more vampire less human in the future, 6 chapters a weeks is good.
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woahhh... This book is classic. Its so good. Loved the storyline. This book must blow up. I highly recommend this book to everyone. This book really needs recognition.
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It's been going well till now, the mc is ruthless by human standards but his attitude to murdering or cleaning bodies up is normal to the demon realm... i forgot the realm's name but anyway he has also shown to be considerate and who knows(excluding nana)he might try to understand mortal feelings and stuff. Can't say much about the stability since it has only started. For me, the writing is quality is great.
PS: the best thing about this novel is that Barry(the alternative version of Larry from tis in the novel)is gonna have a girlfriend and no it's not a body pillow, he is actually gonna get a real girlfriend. Well jokes aside, bye.
A really interesting plot it's a shame for the Writing quality, there are tons of typos and errors, also the punctuation is a mess. The story has lot of potential and a unique plot but you really need to improve the writing quality. Like this it's not entertraining. I would love to read it with an improved English. Work hard Mr. author, you have all the right credentials to write something incredible.