Hello, Author here, this is to let everyone know that despite many trials and tribulations life is currently throwing at this author, this author is going to keep on updating whether slow or fast and bring the novel to its satisfactory ending.Alright, then the shameless five stars are for all the hard work and effort that I have put into making the novel.Thank you. Take care you all. Bye Bye.
I feel so weird writing this review because I wanted to like this story. And part of me does like it. But I also f##king hate it lol. Okay let's start off with this. The Arthur isn't really a bad writer. He set up the world really well and it was easy to follow. Killer monsters, people with powers fights them, good guys are Enforcers. Easy. The first half of Volume One is Good. Really good. At least a3.5 or 4 out of 5. And then you get to the rest... So first off. A compliant. It's f##king long. The first half of volume one is good but so stupidly long. The first chapter is nearly 5000 words. F##k. And it gets longer... Also you can tell it's his first story and the writing is meh. That gets better. But the story gets worse. Volume Two is f##ked. Kind of. The final part of volume one, and the first half of volume two feel mega rushed. I feel like he just made s##t up that he thought would be cool. Thankfully the second half of Volume Two was good. Again. Better than volume one. But I don't want to go through s##t to get a semi valuable diamond. Now Volume 3... What? What even is it? I feel like s##t just happens to happen. The lovable characters are gone there's like 15 plots and its just bad. And spoiler so don't read this part if you care about that it ends on a rebbot? It just ends. Hero dies. Story restarts... Why! That's so stupid and so dumb. I hate it. Legit hate it. Not good at all. So Volume 3 has ended and the Arthur has rebooted the entire story. Volume 4 is volume one again but with some changes. And.. It's good. I mean it's a f##king stupid plot point and a mess to get to it, the Volume so far is the best. It as the easy and fun story of Volume One, with the improved writing. It really feels like its own story and not a part of Enforcers? But still Enforcers? Its weird. I'm gonna keep reading because I know the story is good. It just bad also? It's so weird? The comments are a meme and is just off I guess? So heres what I say. Read Volume one, skip 2, and 3, and go straight to 4. By the end of Volume one you'll know if you enjoy these characters or not.
Excellent novel i discovered browsing through the new releases a few months ago and i read it since then.
This novel has a great story, good characters and a lifelike background.
I recommend this original novel to all the fans of stories with swordmanship and supernatural.
Oct23-2020. Story is relatable to people like you and I. I myself am a manual laborer in my late 20s. College drop out and living paycheck to paycheck.
It's never to late to become better. You have to take the initiative. Lose some sleep, be more tired, and struggle now so that you may prosper later.
With COVID wrecking the employment market. Many states including mine, Indiana, is offering FREE job certificate programs through local institutions. Personally I suggest IT Support. Entry level starts 30-35K a year (About same as a Toyota factory worker) in an office enviroment. Comptia A+.
Don't wait! Take the steps
I have to say it's really awesome to read. Everytime I read a chapter it's getting more badass. So I can just advise go and give it a shot because it's one of the best Novels I read here so far.
I enjoyed my timing reading the story.
So far, it got me hooked and pining for more chapters.
The story-telling is great! It has a lot of potential as well to be great. The weaving of emotions for each scene was impressive.
Please give this story a chance!
5/5
Its a good yuri novel just wish there was more character development because sometimes I forget whos who and have to double check but it has lost of good moments 4 stars
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I would give this a 5star for update rate but there has been n o update for the past like month unfortunately. the story Takes it’s time and leaves nothing out i like the pace. 1000 chapters in and is Still an apprentice 3rd stage.
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The story is really good! I love how Sage always looks after his mom and tries to find a way to save her! I hope she will one day wake up and make him happy! And the game theme is the best too! I love it and would recommend it to everyone!