Plot can be a bit cliche but as it's a wish fulfilment novel i dnt take it to heart. updates are decent. Some characters seem flawed but it might improve later so not to harsh on that. Be warned there is ntr so far his gf making out with a friend but looks like it'll be more and from the context ..the mc liking it? ...anyway this is my review so far will change later if I continue to read.
I’ve been looking for a male lead non-harem romance for forever! And this hits the spot for me. I think you guys should give it a chance too!
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This book is amazing, keep going!Can't stop reading. Can't wait to see more. Do you have any social media that I can follow so I can know when you gonna update?
The story is great and just only a few grammatical flaws along the way but it can practice. Also some usage of words and terms such as for example, the word "drug
I love the way the chapters are organized
Nice writing style and story idea
This novel has great potentials
Worth the read!
Thumbs up to the author for a job well done
I tried soo bad to excuse this novel but nope it's trash. The plot makes no sense.Why not hire him? The government legit has a secret bunker filled with researchers but instead decided that it's best to let the guy live outside without knowing anything. Like legit his work is ending up online and foreign enemies are finding out about him but nope, the government does nothing. Not to mention the fact that they are stealing his research without anything in return. I fail to see anything good about this novel
I have to say this is a great novel and once you get around to 150 you learn so much and see the great potential this novel has! I hope we can eventually get 2 chapters a day
it became trash after 100 chapter, it became a mix of vr, cultivation, taoism even sun wukong and other chinese legends will got into the mix
I read all the story so far and what I found is one of the most promising novel on the app. Our mc's system is not a cheat coming from who know which God but a true, hidden and mysterious system that works beneath the surface of things.
The fact is, I really hope this goes high in ranks. As a reader and reviewer I'm sick to see the same stories always on top.
need something fresh .. kudos!
After writing 100 chapters, I decided to do a new author review.
I have gotten a great response so far, and that gave me a boost of motivation to keep writing this; and after writing 100 chapters, I already know that the story is only beginning, there is so much left to write, and I have a hunch that it will take easily over 1000 chapters to complete, maybe even 2000.
Second, I have gotten a few toxic messages about how MC's looks, because he looks girly and is around 170cm, so I have gotten a lot of messages about making him taller, etc., and that may happen or may not, I am not going to spoil it, but I have reasoning for his looks and his height, and none of those will change before I am ready to reveal the reasoning of his looks and what happened in his childhood.
Third, I have written a lot of mystery, and I enjoyed it immensely. I have given a few subtle hints on the chapters that might reveal why MC is different from the rest, and that White Online isn't as normal as it seems at first, so good luck on finding those.
Fourth, I have seen a few theories made by my readers, and I am sometimes terrified of how well you guys found out about some things which still haven't been revealed yet; it is nice to see all kinds of theories, even though some aren't correct, but it is still nice to read those.
Fifth, about a love interest. Some of you guys might have read the synopsis and seen the tags, but I will still say this. This will be a No Harem novel with only one love interest, and even if some of you guys like Harem, you guys should still try and who knows, some of you might like it. I decided to lock the chapters only around the 53th chap so that everyone has enough time to read and find out if they like it enough to keep paying for more chapters.
Thanks, everyone for reading, and I hope you guys support me in this very long journey.