TwistedTsunamiT4
Really good story here! The world is well built and fleshed out. We continue to learn more about the characters and their background throughout the story. I also really love the style of the cultivation in this world that involves getting spirit equipment from beasts that you can store within yourself or inside a special storage device.
Overall, this is a great read and well worth your time and spirit stones.
The mc is very funny and it fun to see his antics looking forward to reading some more
Didn't expect this to be a hidden gem. It's a pretty good story with a unique system. But it's grammatical mistakes doesn't allow usual readers to enjoy it. Only one who have comprehended the "the dao of MTL" and reached a high realm in it like my humble self can enjoy reading this work.
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And ooh yes there are H-scenes.......
You can Thank me later.
you have to put that one character in every book you right can you just create different characters for each book please
this novel can occupy the first place in the ranking, if only the releases were 7 chapters per week
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More chapters please author I look forward to the story
Wow!
This is such a nice story,the writing quality is superb!
I love the way the writer portrays it's scene, that one could imagine being inside the system too
I had this book in my library for a little while. I finally click on it and see it says GreyBlueSparrow followed by a date. It’s on another one of your books too. I’ honestly pretty curious about that.
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The only complaint I have is that the writing is sometimes confusing but it seems to be getting better. Other than that i see no major issues to be unhappy about. The idea of a roman reincarnation is awesome as well.
This novel have some real potential ! The MC is really someone we want to know more about his past and he his a good person.
Hope the author don't drop it
