i gotta say, this book sure takes me back. I feel like watching Bleach again .but anyways back to the reviewing ,the writing is good and pacing makes it easy to follow also the background is freakin amazing. my only problem with the book is it's long paragraphs, i don't know for others by for me with poor eyesight , it's hard to read it throughly so I suggest split the paragraphs and that's all. thanks for the great book
First of all, the English was good. Based on the first chapter I can say that it was well-defined, but if I wasn't mistaken there were some quotation marks that weren't inserted right in the dialogue. I hope it will improve. Keep writing!
A very interesting story.. Highly anticipated by me as well, i have been waiting for ages to see this authors next novel and here it is. And i am most certainly impressed
Good, Excellent, Enjoyable, Perfect, Fantastic,etc,etc,etc
Basically any positive words
First off I want to say it's rare I gave something a full 5 stars. But I couldn't find any flaw big enough to warrant a 4 star in any category.
Great novel so far that has lots of things that make it differ from novels of the same type.
The author seems to regularly ask for the opinions and feedback from his/her readers about what they think and what they want to see and not see in the novel.
So far the MC is pretty great, hes not super meek or arrogant so far (let's hope it stays that way)
So far he seems pretty normal and I can see myself reacting the same way as he does to a lot of the situations.
Not sure about the romance yet as it's still early but it seems to be doing well on that front and has lots of potential. It also has pretty funny humor and I find myself laughing at most of those moments.
It's managed to separate itself from all of the VR mmo novels out there and I find myself checking for a new chapter everyday.
Love the novel and recommend it even if you hate VR mmos and the like!
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The absolute best novel i have read among the current trial read, except for custom made demon king. It is on par with the library of heaven's path and cultivation chat group in terms of comedy and trolling.
Currently just caught up to the latest chapter, and what I can say about it, is that it holds a certain intrigue and a special pazazz to want u to keep on reading and find out where is the story headed, is the MC changinging in anyway. Though u dont notice some character development there is plently though its small and it progresses over time. I highly recommend this book. And author keep up the good work and have a blessed day, thank u for writing such an interesting book.
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I am absolutely attached to this story. Such a great storyline going and I feel the intensity and horror in the story. Fan from the beginning here! Looking forward to more chapters to come! Keep up the good work!
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Just gonna casually give meself a five star review here. Nice.
Shameless action of day. Done
Any whoop, I'm enjoying the writing process. Hope you guys enjoy the read.
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Is that enough words? I can post the review now? Yes? Tsk... Noice.