the concept is good but the rest is not, the story is like " the mc has a system, he fights and lvl up and face slap" there is no explanation and detail
automatic 1 star just for seeing MC named Thomson. i just tried reading another 2 trial reads with westernized names, just to find out that they are stolen, gutted, bastardized and rewritten versions of the novels from faloo. as such i wont even bother to search raw name for this novel, cause just having westernization is enough suspicion for me that i can expect same things in this novel also...
a good and interesting read, writing isn't perfect but is good, mc isn't brain dead, I was having a problem with the world background as it wasn't clear in the beginning but going further you begin to understand. all in all it's recommended and enjoyable
anyone have recommendations for more novels like this I love the slow slice of life clan building novels, or just a refreshing cultivation novel.
Nice story so far..
pretty good start
the story is alright
issue (for me)
the system is not as idle as the title seem to be
and the date seems to be unnecessary considering the mc character (slow, don't want to deal with other)
as for the world building, i think its a bit grand to start from practically zero to universe.
and lastly the author comment is immersion breaking coz its too long. make it short and concise so it doesn't mix with the story
I give this the big good award.
Writing quality - havent found any grammar mistakes so 5/5 there
Story development - i like how the pacing has been til chap 15, not to fast and not too slow. just hope he doesnt skip his childhood years like so many others do.
Character design - they're good... it seems like. tho that might change once there are more characters introduced
World Background - sort of uniqe? idk it seems familiar but also not, but i dont have anything bad to say about it so its atleast good enough
looking forwards to read this book.
The only thing i might not like about it is that the system is not universal for everyone, then it feels like way to much of a cheat in my opinion. however i wont drop a good book because of something like that.
Gl with your writing author :D
I'm giving 4 stars here. The writing is pretty decent. The plot is also nice and there are a lot of interesting concepts. A lot of details and information are skipped which is a huge downside for me. Pacing feels a bit unnatural but I don't really mind. All in all, this story's a pretty good one. Its just that I can't really be a fan of the story since there aren't many bright spots either. I believe this novel belongs to the above average grade but not particularly unique.
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The plot develops well throughout the chapter and the picture created is admirable with an enjoyable storyline. As a reader i got sinked in this world the Author had created. A fsacinating escape from reality into another world. A great read
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it's a grate experience but is it getting dropped?...no updates for the last 6d!? I hope the author is doing well and will be back soon [img=update]