The novel gets off to a decent start but quickly falls off in originality and plot.In fact, the whole plot is the same: get a reward, show off in front of some rich young master or head of a powerful family, slap them, get a reward, and repeat the whole cycle.On the other hand, the harem is really unnecessary in this novel, the romance is terrible, and the relationships between the MC and the women feel so superficial and banal that they are disgusting. The MC is literally an ATM for women, and the funniest thing is that the MC doesn't even touch them; he is denser and has less initiative than a vegetarian in a butcher shop.
This is by far my favourite original work novel on this website. The concept for the story is interesting and the novel is well paced. I enjoy how characters have worth because it is possible for them to die unlike other novels. I really like the direction the novel is now taking with the Monks we're learning there is more to the world of martial arts in Japan than meets the eye. Friends and Foes have depth, personality and each feel unique from each other, which is a huge breath of fresh air from the usual 2D Chinese Villains. This novel has only gotten better as it continues and I can tell the author has improved along the way. I have no qualms with the grammar as I have noticed nothing off. All in All I would highly recommend, I only wish there was more :) Keep up the great work Author-san!
Cultivation=cool. Molesting a girl=not cool.~~granted the girl was trying to frame him, but two wrongs don’t make a right. I’m a girl so I find it disgusting. I don’t even read romances that have any form of rape (drugs, alcohol, misunderstandings, whatever.) I did like the cultivation and world building, but not enough to continue to read. Looks like it’s kind of leaning towards a harem? He flirts and acts different around girls. Oh, and in case anyone wants to know, this novel is extremely homophobic. Like if two guys are kissing, then prepare to read a whole chapter on everyone throwing up.
The jumping of past and present tense is a difficult adjustment to make as a reader.
First person narrative, but missing first person perspective.
The plot is interesting but I find the characters childish and gullible. The grammar is also very horrendous and this is the worst part. Although the story is interesting, the grammar is really annoying and worsens the story, even if I’m able to read it.
your shameless author here i would like you to give me more reviews on how is the quality of the writing is. i will try to release two chapters per day. thanks
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