Totally worth the read, but it's stolen from another site. This is just not right. Translator even called them out, and it's still here. They better not make any money from this.
If only it was updated frequently it would be the best novel by far
Translation quality 4/5 Nothings Perfect in this world
Stability of Updates 4/5 Nothing can remain stable in life let alone Mankind
Story Development 1/5 CH.1 MC at Lv 35 No info B4 That at All
Character Design 1/5 I Know Almost Nothing About Him at Ch 15
World Background 1/5 Again No info B4 Lv 35 besides him being in the woods. Also Ch 15 so far NO actual info on stats/class choices/skill info etc at all author just says what mc has and not what its Cd is mana cost nothing this is more like a wuxia/xinxia then a VRMMORPG then anything i have not even seen the mc stats sheet in 15 chapters mc killed a elite boss solo and didnt even gain 1 lvl author leaves out almost all Vrmmorpg game info so far at ch 15
I expected humor, but I got a power fantasy instead. MC keeps getting cool stuff by being completely oblivious to everything, while everyone in the chat praises the air he breathes. Very disappointing IMO.
Top story bro. top story bro. hhhhh it has been long time since I readed such an interesting story
Pretty go I recommend pretty good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good
Well, it's been a while!
After having been on hiatus for a long year, I've come back to continue this novel.
It's been a long journey, and one where its chapters have gone through countless iterations where I've tried to fix any plot holes I've left behind.
Being a writer isn't always easy, and I'm well aware that not everyone will like my work, which is perfectly fine!
However, I hope you'll give it a chance :)
Happy reading!
the most stupid, disgusting, idiotic novel I have ever come across. No logic, no sense. How both ML & FL can be so brainless. Please don't write a novel just for the sake of writing. Seriously I'm doubting ur IQ.
I have only just started reading this novel so I can’t comment on much, but I have noticed something I think the author should know. The writing in chapter 8 is pretty awkward. I could tell something was off in the previous chapters but I wasn’t able to pin point it until now. I finally realized the problem while reading the fight scenes of chapter 8. The tense frequently switches from past tense to present tense. One of the main rules in writing is to choose a tense and stick with it. Otherwise it makes the pacing of each scene feel all messed up and off. Going back and editing all of the chapters with conflicting tenses and converting them all into past tense would make the story flow a lot smoother and improve the general quality of the writing. I recommend past tense because it is the one more suited to this kind of story. If you would like specific examples of where I think these problems are and could be improved. I would be happy to help.
This is my first shameless review so of course I'm gonna give this five stars! This is quite a unique story with interesting characters, an engaging plot, romance, humor, and plenty of action. Oh! And blood. Lots of blood. I hope the readers that find this book would enjoy it well.
simply good
*Will edit review. Author did you dropped this book ?