Also known as "Ze Tian Ji
Writing Quality: 4 StarsThe Author personally thinks that the writing quality is decent. However, the grammar is a bit meh...English is not the Author's first language. He had never mingled with the English-speaking community before, and he had very little time to take English lessons since language was not his major. The Author could do this well thanks to his experience reading many English translation novels.The way the Author wrote the ICEE is a bit troublesome. First, he wrote it with own language and then translated it with Google Translation. Finally, he edited it using Grammarly. So, please understand if the writing quality is not very good.Stability of Update: 2 StarsWriting novels is Author's hobby and side job. Meanwhile, he still has his job. Therefore, the stability of the update is not guaranteed and satisfactory. However, he still strives to write whenever free to satisfy his dear readers' curiosity.Story Development: 5 StarsThe pace of the story is relatively slow. However, it was steady.The development of the main character's strength is also a little slow due to his cautious nature. However, it would progress rapidly once he discovered a cultivation technique to conceal his cultivation base.Besides, the main character also still has many things that he must upgrade using his Cultivation Points besides his cultivation base. Although increasing the cultivation base is essential, improving other aspects is no less important.Character Design: 5 StarsThe main character made by the Author is humble, cautious, and steady. However, he is definitely not a soft persimmon.The Author doesn't intend to make the main character low-key. He just wants to make the main character no different from other relatively talented sect's disciples. Still, he is a protagonist, after all. No matter how ordinary he was, he still had some aspect that made him stand up among the people.Apart from the main character, there are also some interesting side characters and some cheap enemies.For more information, you can read it yourself...World Background: 5 StarsThe Author said, "It was good... I think."
This rating of 5, is to show my respect and appreciation of the content of the novel itself, as well as for the effort and time that RWX put into translating these. As one of my favourite novels of all time, it's sad to see it being stolen (copied and pasted) here, basically disregarding the effort and time put in by RWX. Even if QI and WXW are at odds at the moment, there's no need to disregard and utterly disrespect the effort and time of various translators who put out translations that are of high quality, unlike some of the novels on QI. This act is utterly shameless and deplorable, and I can only say that it's sad that (presumably) civilized and educated adults can do this sort of thing.
So, as a warning for people who wanted to see someone transmigrate, this is probably not for you. In the first place, the MC is quite the idiot.Second, the "10" days he has are stretched so much it feels very weird.Third, as the "real" world is becoming something special, I am 100% sure that even after 10 days pass(if they ever do) he wouldn't really transmigrate. It would probably be something like being in both bodies of some such.And lastly(this is a bit of a personal problem with this) the MC is being force fed Taoist and Buddhist talents. The problem is that the MC is an extremely vengeful and petty. Not to say very bloodthirsty. I don't think those religions preach things like that .
this is the type of story that gets better in the later chapters and meant to be a lighthearted read. if you're looking for a serious story, this is not for you.
Good story. Looking forward to the development of the characters and when he finally shows up everyone that thinks he's too weak and worthless...
Our expectations should not be too high, novel centers around face slapping and low level at that, creating moronic and unlikable enemies that are begging for some sort of conflict, finally they get slapped and readers get the satisfaction as someone got what they deserved.
ah I knew when reading the first chapter it seemed familiar. read it a long time ago when on ********** and novelupdates. its a great novel unfortunately stopped translating around the 60s ch and I think the original stopped around 100 and now the links are dead on novelupdates so am happy seeing it here. I hope you cont and finish the story if u can
hi author will you be updating the cultivation park novel soon ????
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Writing quality is good in terms of grammar most of the time but the vocabulary is stale and boring. It's mentally taxing reading one chapter since how dull it is.Chapter release is steady, not surprising for a stale story. Sorry, gotta be toxic.Story development is milked, no doubt about that. The author makes too many questions for things and no answers for many.Character design is honestly garbage since the experience of Izroth doesn't match up. The strongest of his original world but he can't dodge and can't sense anything watching him, you're in a cultivation world that is dog eats dog. Where is your intuition? Due to this the MC's fat fucking layers of plot armor stands out.World background? What the ****? I gave it two stars? HAHAHA, I'm dropping that down to one. There is honestly no foundation for world development.I started reading this when it first came out, I let it sit and maybe I might come back to it later. Maybe I might enjoy it then? Came back recently and realized, "This is just a stale story that is targeted for freshies who don't have a brain to know quality."
Very interesting