To be frank the only good points of this story is the update rate and writing quality but thats about it. story development is insanely fast with no detail whatsoever not even in action scenes. the characters are bland even the MC there is little if 0 character development and even with his life in the line he wants to be peaceful like huh? Overall not recommended unless you just dont care for quality and want a quick read i cant enjoy it cause of that no thrill about it or emotion just meh...
What a good read!!! The writing style of the author is immersive and I can't wait to see the progress of our MC. I like this story of Alexander. 5/5. I hope to see this novel be complete.
Just read the first chapter. It's amazing. Too amazing perhaps. Jokes aside, this is a pretty good read. The first chapter was quite thrilling and I'm hoping the rest of it'll be solid too.
so furious book! Didn't believe it that it would be very nice book. So good in the part of the beginning of the story. Well done for the Author
worth to read...try itI thought just random character but it's not...kkskskeksjejejeififififigotofopedijdjdjdhhdhdhdjshahshshdhdhdhdhdhdhhdhdjdjdhdhdhdhdhchchchchdhcbxbbxh
Three phrases: I lost the sense of Time, my mind was fresh and relaxing when I read, The world is immersive and the system of cultivation is wonderful.
Intriguing... more please. I would like to see more details especially the character development And hopefully romance will be part of the story.
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Well it is quite good . MC personality is also good not like Chinese arrogant MC like I will never bow to anyone . Well it also has many mysterious upper realms which is quite good I just want to read it faster I can't contain my excitement and also FMC is also good she is quite talented at leagues of true geniuses.Overall love it keep it up author-san and release more chapters pl...???
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This is one of the best originals I've seen on this site and everyone should try to read it. That being said there are two major faults with worldbuilding I'd like to point out. This shouldn't stop anyone from trying it, though.First, the money. This new world works like a tribal society. There's no agreement between tribes or races to enforce the usage of gold and silver as currency. No one trusts one another, humans and non-humans. There's no reason for gold and silver to be accepted as currency to the whole world. At best it could maybe be traded by weight in gold, but even that is fickle. People need survivability, not precious metals from Earth that should have no value there.The worst is that the author had the perfect plot device to avoid using gold: Essence. If people could exchange Essence between them, there is no reason for gold and it's pretty clear that, plot wise, essence is meaningful for everyone, no matter the race, and universally acceptable.Second: Manuals. The world has a system where characters can level up stats or get skill from monsters they kill, using 'Essence'. Yet, the author added books that the MC would find and learn techniques, Wuxia-style.That really didn't go well with his system plot. It would be far better for them to be regular skills from the system. Like the dagger technique he got by killing a bandit, for example, instead of a book the character should have a chance to gain the skill of the target, monster or human, this way he would have only the skills the Author wants him to have in the end. Like I said, overall this is a very good novel, but these two points stuck like a sore thumb for me. I'd even advise the author to rewrite them. It'd be a pain, but worth the hassle.