I really like the world you've formulated here, very interesting take on the rebirth/isekai genre. Seems like a very good start to an interesting story! Please keep up the good work, we'll be in your care!
One of the best Percy Jackson fanfics out there. Should be read immediately. Perfect except for not having enough chapters. The story line is great and every character gets a detailed background.
this book is gold and has good potential just wish he can finish it
Hello! I only read up to chapter 5, but I can see the author's hard work.The first chapter is so detailed describing the characters and the situation, but it's a bit of info dump in it. I think some information could be told in the next chapters gradually to give it a more surprising element.The author beautifully described the events in the story. It's so majestic that I really enjoy every description.The dialogues went smoothly. It's not awkward and stiff. That's really good.Each chapter is quite long, but it's not boring. It's interesting and makes me want to read more.The pace is just right. There's a 'seven months later' jumping in the fifth chapter, but it doesn't feel rush. I can still enjoy the development.Overall, this book has a lot of potentials. I hope this book will shine in the future ?
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Although there are some instances where I questioned the mc and also some disappointing hints of nationalism. and for that not a total 5 stars It's still a great read.
Lovely imagination. Annone is gifted and talented in displaying his imaginations. Reading his story gives you an image of which he has drawn in his mind. Keep it up.
Right at the first chapters of this ****show you can notice what most living beings dread... EXTREME PLOT ARMOR.The mc is just an asshole to the king and can just escape the palace without any repercussion, right after that he is forced by a drunk guild leader to enter his guild... guess what?! He just bows down, because he is a strong and independent (e d g y) Mc that won't be a slave to those damned kings! Even if the way that he does that is by plot armor and is ultimately meaningless! Yeah! You go Main character!
i don't even know where to begin. The first 40 chapters are kinda decent but nothing special. With chapter 41 the translation suddenly gets so bad that the whole thing seems like a scam. Has to be among the worst things i have seen on thiss app. Guess the author was up for a quick ripoff.
the only bad thing about this book is that chapters are so slow in updating but apart from that everything is 5 star so dont even consider checking it later just read it ik ur bored.
i will not give a detailed review , i will only tell what i like the most about this novel i like the most about the novel is he does not have a solitude persona and have friends like literally friends with equal standing cause in most eastern novel mc has friends but they seem like little subordinate to mc