Ok. I've read till the last chapters, here we go.
First of all, WARNING TO NEW READERS:
You'll have a lot of things to ignore on the first chapters. The emotes rarify themselves a lot on the latest chapters so that's one good thing, and he stops pressing enter at the end of every sentence too. So HAVE HOPE!
That's the only critical flaws I found writing-wise.
Story development-wise, I won't say it's the best I've ever seen, and I mean the man calls himself the trolling master so I mean yea... The POV are sometimes all over the place, and there's little things you could nitpick, but overall, I'll say it and I have pretty high standards, the story was enjoyable.
Came here after reading Yggdrasil's pupil, so I knew it was gonna get
better. I was right! It does get better. The carefree style of the author stays, but at least you understand what's happening, and how hilarious it is ;)
The world-building makes out a pretty dark world, outlining the naïve character of the MC.
Naïve, but not stupid, though! Sometimes, I was shocked by how creative the MC's plan were. He just bad at talking to people, leading to lots of misunderstandings.
In short, read it ;)
A novel with a very good idea, but in my opinion, the author destroyed with so many of the three (racism/nationalism/patriotism) So anything that smacks of one of the three will be removed, oh and anything that seems stupid to me and doesn't add anything to the story as well.
This book is amazing, keep going! Can't stop reading. Can't wait to see more. Do you have any social media that I can follow so I can know when you gonna update?
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This is one of the best novel I have read so fair with 80+ free chapters ( including fast pass ) and if you are wondering to read this novel or not then I recommend reading it.
But to understand what is going on you have to continue read it tilled chapter 10 or so ( if I remember correctly )
so I am not Gonna spoil anything so you have read it
Wow what an amazing novel as expected from the author, loved the writing style and progression of the storyline, amazingly written mc too, rating this a well deserved 5 stars
Catchy synopsis. Adding this to library.
Can't wait to see more of Alexander.
I recommend this book to those of you out there that love adventure.
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ignore me i am just here bcz i love yanderes
Awesome novel. Very interesting read. There's something different about this novel. Don't know what it is, but it made me read it in one go. MC isn't acting like a naive dumb hero wanting to save everyone. Survival is his first utmost priority. Wouldn't just make friends willy nilly, specially if it's obvious that they aren't very sincere. Right now there's not much to go on, but I really feel like this is going to be an interesting novel. Hopefully.
Its not your typical otome villain story. Its actually good man. Its been a lovely experience so far. Thanks for your work here dude.(BDW I'm from the future, so if u have any queries, feel free to ask..!!)
A strong start, and an intricately-designed system that is not designed to be too cryptic. The way Japan is portrayed is also good enough as a fan of Japanese media myself. Will look forward to what happens next.