[Updated Author Review]The novel had ended-what can you expect?-Opening (Meme)-Poor Grammar (It's enjoyable only if you can handle it.)-Word Choice (Maybe...)-Characters (Meh...)-World (Meh...)-Ending (Rush...)Why 4 stars then?-Self Encouragement
Okay, you're a legend at FPP. This story is amazing and you gotta keep going. I love the way it's written. It just shows the way you put the work into this, magnifico.
poor Owen I wish him luck on he's adventure to becoming the protector of love as the person who has the anti ntr system does he get a girlfriend in future chaps?
Author here, I'd appreciate the feedback of chapters if you have the time. I'm a new author so I might tend to miss things. Leave a chapter comment or anything and I will rectify mistakes. Thanks.
Very interesting so far as long as it maintains the quality which I think it will do and even be better in the future since it sets up a lot of stuff that will pay off
Another amazing work, really liked it, hoping for a stable update, not much to say on my part other than this is so good, I hope it won't get dropped like the other lol
I've read the raws, and this is perhaps on of the bests. Its basically release that witch, but in a cultivation world. Characters are nice, and the mc actually has a brain, without having Wikipedia like memory.
you need to do more research, golden core isn't powerful at all. this like first couple of chapters I'd full of you pushing to us that "ohhh ancient sect./ golden core powerhouse" no. golden core middle of the beginning levels its like a small boss that shouldn't fill a couple of pages worth just to push on to the readers "he's strong" lol. but good try.
please don't read this novel
something that could be done in 3-4 chapters took 20 chapters.
this story is quiet generic but with too many fillers.
There were no men in this world.
Imagine if it's the other way around...
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Good read!
Each character has their own personality and feel real enough. The background is also very good and the power structure is visible early on too.
Your update stability needs more work though.
Overall it's a nicely written story!