(I enjoy the majority of the story so try it out) What will you get? I’m at ch56 and it’s a really cool story with seemingly great potential. It also feels like 10-15ch have been filler or half a chapter will describe one scene that doesn’t really matter. I’m still enjoying it but there are times when you get a description of what the guys appearance is for 6 paragraphs or something that progresses the plot is happening, but you have to read 8 paragraphs of soldiers reactions. I could go on, but I’m still enjoying the story for the most part. Sorry for the rambling.
very awesome,??thank you author for the your wonderful love story ???
Goodluck on this new book nihilruler??. it was amazing start
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Have to ? but I definitely feel my writing has improved, but is also far from perfect. Just know, I am trying my best to create a great story for you to read :)Thank you so much for checking it out, and if you like it, please add it to collections and add a review. Heck. Leave a review even if you don’t, just let me know why so I could possibly fix it ?Despite my triggers, I will let you know, as one of my chapters say- no bad deed goes unpunished. ?
Immediately all researchers started their preparations.
"Mr. Dark contacted you, sir," Lilith answered.
"Was?" Liza was a little surprised.
"Naruto." Bruce breathed, "Of course."
Your brain gets smart but your head gets dumb
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Filo tersenyum dengan mata berbinar "gue yakin kali ini dia serius sama adek lo"