Writing Quality great.Stoy it's too early to judge but it look good.Character Design I halfway do not care I just hope the last people is black. Updating is great but u probably shed upload one chapters a day after 150 ch.World background is good for now.
I hope all of you enjoy this read, if you do feel free to leave a review and maybe even support it by adding the novel to your library and voting with power stones. If you see any mistakes or repetitions anywhere, feel free to point them out in the comments for that chapter.
AND HERE I WAS SHOCKED THAT THIS STORY WAS GIVEN ONLY WITH 1.9 RATINGS! THIS STORY IS MAGNIFICENT BUT THERE ARE SHAMLESS THIEVES IN THE WORLDDDD!!
DELETEEEEEEEEE!!!!
Amazing story that i ever read, main protagonist is overpower among historis age. We need more chapter... .. We need more chapter... .. We need more chapter... .. We need more chapter... ..
We need more chapter... .. We need more chapter... ..
Fallacy here, ignore the shameless 5 five star.
I just want to write to make this a good novel and let my readers enjoy.
But for those people that want a romance so desperately, I may not be able to provide in the early chapters.
I also want to write a romance but from my past novels rushing it never once worked for me, I want to write an overpowered MC who kills a lot of people he doesn't like alright? So if I were to rush the romance and introduce a two-dimensional heroine no one will like that so please understand. I want to write romance as fast as possible but I also want to flesh out the MC (although I suck at doing so.)
P.S. I like reading comments and reviews alike, whether it be trash talk or praise I always read all the responses that I get, especially the ones that point my mistakes that let me improve.
This is a long rambling review.
It's great so far. I'm really enjoying the premise about the "Fatal Chapters" and having MCs killed off. All of the main characters are good and the author seems to be having a lot of fun.
The chapters that are comedy are ACTUALLY FUNNY, and the chapters that are supposed to be dark aren't edgy or trying to be cool. It's all done very very well. I could see this being a show one day if it continues at this quality but I just need more chapters to really form opinions on the MCs and the plot still very early in but I like where it's all going
Recommended to fans of these tags.
while I really enjoy rushed storys this is on another lvl. it's to the point that it starts to be kind of random also....
wth are ****** THESEE FOR you put them every 10 sec in the text
Really nice book different from other system books. Amazing description, Great writing and an interesting storyline.
The Mc is honestly just disgusting he just stands there and watch the supernatural civilians get raped by humans and even lets the humans go and don't get me started on what he did to the assassin siblings, and he acts like humans are the good guys what a hypocrite there is no saving someone as disgusting as hm.
okay i read it but it was just so so.i was interesting while it lasted . its's a wasted potential novel.
We. Need. More! Finally some good kingdom building
story is good mc is op and evil. but plzz dont add harem and ruin the novel?