The pace of this novel is so f**king slow, you could cut more than half of the words and the sotry wouldn’t lose anything significant.
It’s not bad, but it needs heavy editing and cutting
Awesome Best Novel! Character Design and World Background is Amazing. MC is just perfect and satisfying to read. Interesting. R-18 content is Hot, detailed very good. Writing quality on high level goes very smoothly that I even felt touched with family drama. Love the Plot and looking for much more! Thanks!
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good book
keep it up ???
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?????this novel is just a whole a vibe a different whole vibe.. people say it's slow because the MC is low-key but the MC is soooooooo OP
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I like it quite so far... I already read all released chapter so far. I like the way how you make the MC suffer to let the readers see that he is weak. .. Although the plot progresses in a faster way since it is just a few days since the Mc was transmigrate here, I like how the story develops. Good jod author. .Keep up the good work
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The synopsis should be = “I barely do something, and get rewarded massively disproportionately it return” or “I’m useless without an overpowering cheat that gives me free stuff”
Seems like a waste of time
I wanna read it, but I'm not too sure about what that last sentence is supposed to imply. I'd rather not have a MC that forgives his wife for cheating on him or something like that.
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This novel is very different from the usual 'villain' type. Here I truly feel that the MC is irredeemable. The novel name is very apt to his character.
The grammar is good, chapter length is decent.
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