Aiden45
The story is good and has potential. Also has good grammar and pacing. The mc is likable and also other characters. The storyline is starting to get interesting! Good luck!
Strong female lead wrapped in the brilliant aura of the story.?Keep up the good work author. Totally recommended an enjoyable read.????
The funniest cultivation novel in webnovel. I bling it. The path of library is only funny for 200 chs then get boring. This one super funny.Highly recommend to read for jokes and disalogue. Dont read the beard joke. Becos it never exist. The ones that dont like the beards never read this book becos it never exist lol.Instead of fighting with cultivation strength, it starts off with where ur manly beard? ?At the start, u may think author is a girl cos girls will like it ?
read it on mtl. Overall very good, but the author dropped novel . with a super fast paced final chapter where many storylines weren't completed, more questions than answers. the main reason - according to the author "My book is all too low and I won't be able to pick it up next month. The current subscription is getting lower and lower, and the income is terrible." If you don't mind how the novel ended, I highly recommend it.
the whole people don't die thing was a bad gimmick cuz it only comes to bite the mc. while Liam the delusional is able to kill someone day one of his reincarnation. at about 170 I realize that the author lost the plot. Liam and Lucas get so much screen time it's become there story and lith is just an observer. I don't like skipping parts of stories but the author literally put 2 chess games back to back. again Liam and Lucas are getting to much screen time and Liam should be dead by now. I can't honestly keep reading this woth how little of a role the mc plays in his own story.
Lemme start.It's very scary how the MC is literally too similar to... uhh... a friend of mine... HAHAHAHAOH MY GOD WTH I'm not hardcore otaku but I'd consider a VERY PROUD DEGEN BASEMENT DWELLER.Anyways, slice of life, with some drama, and then otaku stuffYESEYEYSYESYEYSYEY IF YOU LIKE THAT READ THIS BOOK YOU B-BAKA!
this is the most enjoyable read so far, ive never read romance novel without xianxia and wuxia bullsh*t and this is really revive my taste bud for romance (i dont mean that the novel is pure romance, there will be a bit kicking here and there bur overall the story is contain slice of life - revenge and romance) , and this is my first novel about romance since every romance novel out there start with female mc instead of male one,
and i found this intriguing, as for the story
this is similar to empress gigolo's which is the male MC is weak chicken that will use his in-laws backing and his wife to do everything that he wishes, as for the MC Gold finger, he transmigrated with xray vision and laptop in his sea of consciousness with 20years worth of medicine knowledge, bachelor degree and extremely handsome face
Overall the story is very good, the face slapping isnt to forced after reading 60 chapter
Note : Highly recommended for those who like romance but dont like the MC to be female
Great story. Everything is well thought without major flaws. Apart from the beginning when the game is introduced, all the story is online at chapter 101. The only weakness of the author is the lack of narration of combat scenes.
The MC is actually smart and not an average Joe described as a genius only to make dumb decisions later. The fact that being strong in the game is needed for survival is a nice addition.
It is an awesome plot and I can't wait to read more.
Unfathomable patriarch this title is fvking clickbait
At first I tried reading this because of the domineering title but tf with this mc? What part of him is unfathomable. So an average idiot is unfathomable?
If you read this book, you definitely admire it.
The beginning is good.
Well background setting.
Waiting for more chapters.
Good luck with your work
I like it a lot it was easy to read and flowed very nicely, I can’t wait to see the next chapter to see what happens next and how the plot will unfold.
I like how this story goes! The environment is bleak and chaotic. The characters are well-fleshed out (see what I did there?) . It's an adventure that you don't want to commit but you really want to read. I rather be the reader than them in starring in the story.
