So incredibly repetitive. All the girls are in love with the protag, all in the same way. Maybe it's just because it's too early, and you can very well say that, but I don't care.
I would honestly prefer if it was something like a tragedy/psychological novel, where protag is alone in the world with no one on his side. It would be edgy and emo(probably), but I would still prefer that over this. Too bad such a novel doesn't seem to exist.
So if you're looking for a casual, borderline brainless read, then this is for you.
The grammers nice though. I haven't noticed any odd sentences at all.
That's all you really need to know. The rest of this review was written by me for my own amusement. Read it if you want, but it's not good/helpful or polished.
Short summary, basically protag had to act as a villain in a novel cuz a system wanted him to. However after dying he has to do it again for some reason. Here's the catch though, basically every single character thats female with a name fell in love with protag and got reincarnated.
That's not even a joke. Every single female with a name. And the reasons they fell in love with protag aren't even that good either. Things how they've been watching him for years and fell in love. Don't get me wrong, if it's once or twice then it can absolutely be creative. When it's like 10 or whatever amount of heroines this stories going to have though, it just comes across as lazy.
Who am I kidding. It's probably going to be like 1000 different heroines.
Anyway, so they love protag. Not like a light crush or anything, but basically a yandere type thing. I'm not against yanderes at all, in some cases they're actually pretty nice, but it's kind of ridiculous here. Not sure why but they just irk me. Maybe it's because they're all the same in terms of how they love him. They hate the original mc of the novel(in fact they all conspired to kill him in their past life. One lady even sacrificed millions of lives to do it or something. That's just douchy. Like seriously. I'm going to go off on tangent so skip if you don't care. It reminds me of this other novel where the protag is a spy or something but he gets betrayed. He has a final card up his sleeve though, and that's to literally blow up bombs he's set everywhere. It doesn't even make sense. Like nuke level. Like demolish the entire world, killing billions in seconds. Why? To get back at like three people. It's so annoying. It's so lazy. The protag doesn't even feel regret as he floats in a sea of souls, murdered by him. Leaving aside how unrealistic it is, it's just so douchy. God that made me so mad. Honestly I've got a incredibly filthy mouth in terms of swearing, or at least used to(league of legends level), but I can't even use it. God.), and blindly love the protag.
It's very noticable as well, at least to the protag. But just one word from the system and he lets it go.
I don't feel like doing this review anymore, so peace.
One star for obviously not having several novels (lol) like Reverend Insanity, but seriously tho the amount of propaganda that will be here would outmatch anything you will ever see.
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Just want to say author has a beautiful imagination.
Cool MC
I like how MC is lazy and indiferent but also intelligent and mature.
Very captivating scenes.
5 star character design
Most likeable book Ive found in a while.
Bruh stop fking putting this kind there are already 10 of them ffs
Now that 50 Chaps are up, I am updating my previous review.
This is my first novel after reading webnovels for than 2 years, so except some grammatical mistakes. I would be happy to correct any mistakes if you readers point it out.
The main reason MC is playing the VR game is for money. So, he doesn't have grand ambitions like be the top player, etc.
The MC gradually becomes an OP character due to factors like future knowledge, some unexpected gains, etc.
Everything he does, he plans it and takes no. of measures in case of failures taking full advantage of his perfect memory due to reason unknown.
There are 3 main FL's that are really important characters. Yes, they will be in MC's harem.
But, the harem matter won't happen for 200 some chapters and it won't be some stupid forced harem like collecting Pokémon. So, do give it a try even if you don't like harem.
Some mysteries are there.
And lastly, you can ask any question you would like to in here. I will answer all of them.
Thanks For Reading My Novel.
Nowadays trial read never get updated after ch40 even after being picked zzz
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I am extremely impatiently waiting for this book to be picked. like why has it been 5 months since I first saw it and voted but it hasn't yet passed the screening? it's numbers are ridiculously high and I want to finish this story.
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First of all, good job so far sir author. I hope you can keep up with this momentum, and i wish you all the best.
Secondly, I truly enjoy rewding the story so far, the MC is quite immature sometimes which add to his character flavor. And the fact that the author inserts the MC's monologue while he maintain a calm facade conversing with others is hilarious. Anyway, initially I won't comment much about the item names but reading the title for this particular chapter is funny as heck. Good job
Good storyline!! It's interesting to read, story is moving smooth , although writing quality is also nice but needs some more improvements waiting for more updates , good job keep it up author!!
Idk how to make reviews, but Ig this will do.This is an amazing book. The whole story seems interesting and I can't wait to read more about it. The characters are very memorable, and this is a thing coming from me, who forgets the characters until chapter 50. So author, good job.