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The idea alone of being able to make and control your own dungeon in a fantasy land was enough to get me interested in this story, and I'm so glad I stayed and read, the updates could be a lil ore frequent, but honestly, it's always worth the wait for each chapter :)
Good stuff. Lets gooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo!
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One of the Best Novel among recent Trial.
Storyline and Plot is interesting.
MC is Quite Good.... this Novel seems well written.
let's just hope this will not have racism in later chapters.
This Novel is Worth your time and money.
I’ve read the first 75 chapters so far and find the story interesting. The writing while not the best keeps you interested in the story and each chapter is better than the last.
The transitions between the point of view (POV) don’t flow smoothly especially at the beginning however the tone is consistent. The chapters are at a decent length (aka not too short).
I added the story to my library as i am looking forward to how the story progresses and improves.
Theres not a lot of world developement in the 1st 75 chapters but there is character development for 2 of the characters. Some of the development of the main character could have been explained more before the multiple time jumps.
Translation quality seems pretty good so far, so it's quite easy to be immersed into the story early on. Plot is a breath of fresh air and is fairly interesting. Quite an enjoyable read overall. Definitely recommend checking it out.
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Bro, you should stop writing and become comedian instead, it not that you book is bad but it good as fk, the comedy bro, it is pure gold... The world is dark place we need more comedian to brighten the world!
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Hi guys, for those who already read this book, this is a new copy because something happens in my last book so i hope you forgive me and continue to read this book thank you
