love the character build and the world background. Hope our mc becomes and the author can increase the release rate.So far, keep up the good work ?
The main character is a crybaby, he can't solve his problems by himself. He needs the help of other people to solve his problems...........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
I like it. The story is good, and the MC is competent. They actually care about the things that they create, and are actually pretty strong, despite being a stone. I like this book.
Sinseramente la historia esta muy buena pero hay un problema a partir del capitulo 40 en donde tienes que desbloquear lo desbloqueo y me sale la letra en chino y después en ingles y como solo entiendo español a la hora de usar google traductor las letras me van a cuenca y es con todos los capitulo
IF YOUR DONT DROP THE NOVEL .EVERY SINGLE STONE THAT I HAVE IS YOURS.140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140
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I just read two chapters and the chapters are quite interesting, the storyline is outstanding ^^, for me, I feel shameless to give a review because I am just new to the writer's world, but from the reader view I can predicate this novel will be one of the best novels Keep it up Maryam ^^
the writing quality is extremely shotty at times that's the biggest flaw and by far the most consistent which takes away from readability...
Greetings, this is the author again. This story is actually done, so you will be reading a novel with an actual ending. I did, however, end it in a way that I could continue it if ever I wished to-- just in case enough readers request it.This story is very close to my heart, as it is actually the first ever book that Webnovel took a liking to enough to have it contracted. I was a literal newbie in writing when I wrote this story, but I hope you like it as much as I loved writing it. Thank you!
The world of idle online as well as the story does not follow any preset standards compared to other stories i have read so far the character development has been rather small in terms of backGround but that is wholly do to the length so far Im sure there will be more as time goes on. i am Also really enjoying the choices the author is having the main character decide as they go against the norm but aRe not blatently overpower. All in all a wonderful story keep up the hard work!
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The Main Character is a coward. That would have been fine, but he whines so much about his ‘bad’ luck and l doesn’t even use his brain to turn desperate situations around. He needs some deus ex machina bullshit just to survive because he’s so pathetic.MC is also a spineless pushover.A loli will also come to be his companion for a very arbitrary version, and if you like violent and unreasonable ‘tsunderes’, then you’ll like her.His power is fine. He just whines about it’s source and doesn’t think about what he can do with it.Think about it for a sec. If you are going to die and your only way to live is to do cutesy, girlish poses, would you do it?If no, then the MC with his overly high masculine pride may be relatable to you.