The story is a beautiful background, and this kind of tastes also coincides, its main character has a combination of imaginative and happy and powerful, in the whole novel.
At first I consider this novel rather woeful. The author has explained his language issues yet I cannot condone the fact that he didn’t attempt to utilise a proofreader for this novel to help correct grammar and the many spelling issues. I find that rather in poor taste and lazy. I am sure there could have been a few volunteers who could assisted in some way to let readers have a smooth experience.Ok got that off my chest. The novel itself is interesting and I must admit captivating. The genre introduced here is a favourite of mine and I do enjoy how it is coming across. I admit I have to interpret things on the fly as the delivery is painful, however I manage to struggle through satisfactorily to enjoy what I have read.All in all it is a decent novel, just really really fix the writing (isn’t there programs out there that can assist, think Grammarly or the like is out there) and I suggest editing the earlier chapters. People haven’t got the patience to try and interpret what is being written if it isn’t clear enough.
Good story lines …keep it up auther.want to read more
This story is an extraordinary achievement, enthralling from the opening chapter to the conclusion. The author’s exceptional storytelling skills are clear in the well-crafted characters and layered plot. Every unexpected turn held my attention, making it hard to put the book aside. The language is both beautiful and clear, creating vivid imagery that immerses you in the setting.
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This is getting interesting. Update soon please.
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One of the novels that marked my path to chinese novels.I can't rate it's quality without being a little biased for it being my first one, but let's give a try.I enjoyed the novel throughout even tho the final part was a little bit rushed and it did not give a "end story" feeling, I think it was a good plot.Like any other novel by IET, the cultivation system and the understanding of the laws really stand out comparable to others, to me the best part of his histories. For the worst part I think the relationship of the MC with his family is really plain and there is not anything interesting about it.
Excellent novel, very well written and with a lot of developments and good characters. I wish it had more updates but it is fine by now. I will keep reading it
I like the blurb. I like the characters but I can’t fall in love with them. I can’t lose myself in their world because as of chapter 140 the author just tells us what is happening. They don’t show us. It’s a shame because this novel has the bones to be great. Author, create more dialogue. Stop summarizing the story and let us see/experience the scenes. I don’t want Ichi to tell me something happened, write the scene out.Hopefully, you will take my advice bc this really could be a fantastic read.
When I read the synopsis, I suddenly remembered a side character from an anime who had the ability to copy other abilities, and seeing as how the MC also has something similar going on, I couldn't help but be interested to read more. I rarely read novels in this genre but I like this one. The storytelling keeps you interested and the plot looks solid.I'll definitely recommend reading this!
I love this! I’ve read one other book so far like this, but they differ in amazing ways possible! Shane is an arrogant, cocky boy who dies and now must navigate this in between world. He has a big heart though, as he saves both Frank and Tess. He also has this dark cosmic power that makes everyone around him afraid of him. Though, I don’t see him being a real threat. He seems to be aware of everything he does and doesn’t truly want to do harm to anyone as long as they don’t do harm to him or his sister.I’m intrigued.