I read it up until it's 'Finale not finale chapter' and liked it, unfortunately the author didn't really finish it. He wrote fairly far into the story but at some point decided to drop it(for health? work? lack of interest? lack of money flowing in?) when realistically it was more than halfway done.
The 'Finale not finale' chapter lays out the rest of the story in almost bullet point form so you at least know he had a rough plan for the rest.
I really liked it too, and at least it wasn't fully dropped...but still!
This is actually a quite solid novel. Well written and it got me hooked. I really hope this gets picked!
Super op with undeveloped plot and world background, a very wish fulfilling novel that make no sense.... The potential of this novel is very limited there is no fight sense and nothing worthy to drive you to read more chapters...
Basically a trash...
all those fking points yet he can't increase that fked up concealment shi t ...
and complain about not having points to increase...
and the author is literally a dog fker that doesn't even explain any fk he's writing...
this is one of the worse type of novels...
no offense to any authors...
but this type of novels authors are a disgrace...
This book is a comple copy of a book on kindle word for word don’t rea this book.
I dont think I have ever seen a book writen in this fashion before, and it honestly works! Loving the overall building of the world, even though the first few pages were a little confusing. I cannot wait to see what else this book has to offer!
The story has a good lore behind it the the writing quality makes me not want to read it. It's not rare to read a nonsensical sentence and have to guess what the author is trying to portray. The character design for the MC is pretty decent, Sometimes he acts like a spoiled brat but it's not a dealbreaker for the story. He's written to be a person who's pretty smart but at times he act like a complete idiot with no inductive reasoning. What I hate about the story is every other character. The character is decently OP considering his past, yet still every fight all his allies are sh*ting bricks scared outta there minds even though MC constantly wins easily either through brute strength or good planning. At some point. Everyone has some type of trust issue. His slaves/servants fail to believe he can win his fights even though he constantly wins. He doesn't trust the voice in his head and constantly questions the old man in his head. Just an overall annoying story to read. But I also don't want to drop reading it since it seems like it could have good potential
I got through the 29 free chapters and by the end of them it was difficult to read due to the number of errors. The story has promise and could be a good one, but I can't see spending my fast passes or buying coins to unlock chapters if the quality is going to be the same as what I read. It is a shame as I think I could have enjoyed reading the novel if I could actually read the novel without thinking about the issues.
i think i already read this in manhua. .
The premise would have been good if not for the recurring stupid characters and forced plots that happen solely for the mc. Such as being disdained literally by breathing air. And the "coincidental" examination of disciples of which the mc partakes and dominates. What's even ridiculous is that the supposed "geniuses" were nothing but characters with no depth, purely made to act as a pedestal for the mc's glory. They saw the mc easily dealing with the prior opponent but they still underestimate him, it would have been better if they at least have been a little more cautious, but no, they instead fought to be the first to fight the mc calling him "prey." I understand that the mc's abilities have to be showcased every now and then but please, don't do it in a very ludicrous way. Even a toddler would be cautious to a certain degree once a situation takes a turn from what was otherwise expected. In summary, add more depth to the characters and don't force events for the convenience of the mc like "an event that only happens for a century" or "a village attacked out of nowhere, and the mc is put in the position of defending." Make a clear outline of what the characters are, their personalities, abilities, and such. It will help make the characters appear unique among others instead of the usual "opposing and worshipping characters" where they either worship, oppose, or some "ice-cold super genius woman that frowns upon men but was taken aback by the mc's strength hence falls head over heels" cliché. Make the story a little more alive, that's all I'm asking.
This good. I don't read new novel usually but I was bored and gave it a try and I don't regret it. I like ruthless mc and he IS RUTHLESS . Don't stop and keep updating. Thnx
The author has a good storyline and I'm glad to be have read this piece. It's off with a good start and I can't wait to read more chapters. Are you looking for fantasy novels? Be sure to check this out, you won't be disappointed.