A very interesting novel but as many have pointed out the grammatical errors are really annoying.Pls fix them asap atleast the first 30 chaps else it'll be a shame if this gem doesn't get recognition because of this simple mistake
so Basically MC is servant of rich lady.The master can basically kill her servant with a thought.I'm not reading this?. ....................
You already know that if it Is written by the one and only awespec so it is definitely going to be good. Rn there are 12 chapters and in all honesty it is to early to judge for me and I am just tryna be the first one to write a review. I should probably wait for a lot more chapters to come out but I am already behind on to many books.
Standard IET stuff. Honestly all his books are the same and reading one means you read them all. I see no difference between Ji Ning, Qin Yu, Xu Jingming, etc are all literally the same character. But thats fine, people who are reading IET for the first time will get something that isnt straight garbage but I have a big problem with this particular novel.
I can *feel* the nationalism when I read this. IET wasnt making it subtle whatsoever here. China #1 can be felt throughout my first 100 or so chapters, lemme explain. So the entire world is given VR technology and when they go online they can practice martial arts. After a while a ranking ranking is made with the strongest at the top and guess which nationality 2 of the top 3 are? Thats right folks, its granddaddy China with the other from Botswana. It just seems like China is naturally more talented than every other country by a wide margin. Lets not even get into the comments from the live streaming in VR, its constantly about oh man, these expert martial artists from [other country] are strong, but China is still better.
I think the funniest example is in chapter 148 when the strongest from Korea is made out to be an arrogant mf who is going around challenging the top 3 just to get more views on his live stream.
I feel like IET's recent novels have lost the magic from Desolate Era, Swallowed Star, COILING DRAGON, Stellar Transformation, etc
and part of that is the nationalism here, while in the other recent novels its been a lot more logical. In his earlier works the MC got super lucky at the start and then had to muddle through the entire universe just to be the best and in recent time the MCs dont get lucky, they were just naturally talented and got some benefits here and there that make sense. My problem is that making sense doesnt carry the same *brilliance* of a moment like in Desolate Era where Ji Ning gets the inheritance and starts his journey or when Lou Feng died fighting the Gold Dragon.
Love it and would like you to continue the story.......,....................................................................................
Amazing story, really take all of my attention inside. Love the plot of this story[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update]
interesting would like to read ...........................................................................................................................................
MC's life is too miserable ........................................................................................................................
A nice novel with great potential
Then the author pulled a reversal (at about chapters 70 or so) turning it into a trash novel, copy pasting from another novel shamelessly, changing just the character names and removing a lot of content in between making the story senseless.
The author didn't even bother to adjust the story to fit the system in his/her novel. He/she basically discarded the entire system concept(success rate system) which was developed in the previous chapters n didn't even bother to apply success rate concept when possible in the new chapters.
The story after 70 or so is blatantly following ultimate scheming system not even bothering to disguise it. I feel the author suddenly developed intese hatred towards uss n thus developing a very trash version of it.
Devil Paragon writing never disappoints. As a loyal reader of the previous story, Konrad the Conqueror of the Omniverse, of course the author new writing caught my attention by the way the author made an extraordinary work before, at least I hope this new work is as amazing as the previous work, and there is no doubt that this work is also a masterpiece. which is extraordinary but I personally think I will still choose Konrad work which is more interesting than this (Although opinions may change because this work is not yet finished). Why? First, this new work may be a little more complicated in plot than the previous work (of course this complexity is also what makes Devil Paragon writing add to its appeal). Second, the use of the names of the characters is a bit difficult for me to remember, and it is different from previous works which use names that are inclined to western culture. Third, considering that this new work will be more inclined to eastern culture, where usually this type of novel has a storyline that is usually 'probably' very predictable. As we know, the cultivation novels circulating in the market have a storyline that is usually boring. I've read over 300+ chapters, and there hasn't been a characteristic as boring as the usual cultivation novels on the market. In essence, my opinion about this novel is very good, because this work may have the potential to rival or possibly exceed the previous work, which lacked the previous work which lacked the development of Konrad female character, which this new work shows how the female character is close to Xinzi. has a clear development.
Interesting i Will Comeback to reading this again. can't wait the next chapter...... .
It's a very realistic novel it's centered around the world background of RimWorld the character development is rather realistic the development of the story is kind of a new player playing in RimWorld. All in all a good novel and concept unfortunately this ain't my type of thing but it's very good for a sim management novel altho almost has no aspect of a game.