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Typical cultivation stuff. The cheat is interesting, but the novel itself is not.
The writing quality is really great and the action is well written. I'm excited to see what kind of character the MC creates next! Also, the world building is fleshed out really well. Great work!
Amazing story so far(ch 91) Reminds me a lot of famous novel Dual Cultivation. Though here mc is more egoistic, ruthless, decisive and hard to impress which i like it a lot☺️
Starting 10 or so chs aren't too impressive but rather leave a bad impression with author's a bit too unique system and acceptance of female lead Eve of him and their relationship but story improves very much as it progresses packed with lot of action and cool stuff and ofcourse amazing hot scenes
So it tool me a minute, but there isn't much for me to critique on the story per say. I will praise the world building in this world. I am a fan of it as well as the power system in this story.
I am highly optimistic for the future clashes using the system and the type of challenges that our ML faces.
I am rating this highly because i see a lot of potential if writing and world background expands. Granted we are still in the beginning so there is plenty of room for development so i am anxious to see where this piece of work goes.
ok I used to dislike MCs who were too submissive but for some reason the reasoning he gives behind his actions is something that I as a reader realised after reading tons of novels....good work no arrogant mc but one with a brain...my wronged heart is at peace from the overused cliches in other books... especially...M T L Chinese novels...plz update soon..
I just read it, Peak, and ii just decided to drop by and drop a rating
The story has great potential.... It will become a good story in no times...
Keep writing till the end ....
There is some grammatical error, I hope you can pay attention to that sector too, as it helps with the quality of story.
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