I really hope the author continues this webnovel. Although its similar to some other, its also unique in its own way.hiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii
As of chapter 7, it seems interesting enough that I will continue reading. although I'm not sure how the author will continue it but im interested in finding out. I feel like the pace has been eey fast-paced so far, which isn't necessarily bad, but I feel like spending more time with some of the future main side characters in their youth would have been nice, or showing a small part of the development of humans and demons would have been nice too.
The narration and creativity are on another level if intelligence liked the way the author expresses her characters very well. It seems very engaging and ongoing as we read. Good job author, keep it up!
This novel was very informative and interesting. I recommend this book to anyone who's really interested with this kind of genre. I promise that you'll enjoy and never regret reading this.
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The story is very interesting. Your way of writing is very unique, you have an interesting plot. Overall it's really amazing and I can't wait to read more!
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Chapter 20 Review:
So 20 chapters in and not only is the MC supposed to be frugal with his magic use but apparently the author has also decided to be frugal about focusing on this aspect as well which was the whole draw of me wanting to read this story.
Instead there's a jarringly quick love interest that gets sickeningly saccharine and stays that way so far. And of course this is set within the overwhelmingly generic school setting with the requisite dumb antagonists who don't approve of him getting the girl.
All of that is a major eyeroll but my real issue is with the lack of focusing on the magic system and especially on how/why the MC is a "frugal mage". At this point, unlike the couple's supercharged interest for each other, my own interest in this story has become limp and flaccid.
great story I just wish I knew if it is harem. he has met and interacted with a total of maybe 3 guys. I don't particularly care either way but it is odd because with this focus it almost seems really weird when you have 9 different girls all around with some having flirty and cheap characteristics. then all of a sudden he is drawn to one and just flat out mentions the others aren't important to him, which is fine but then why make them all the same temperament and introduce them the exact same way. I am terrible at names anyway so I can't remember what one she was much less what she's done and can do. I guess the biggest flaw i have found is that the characters grow but they all grow the same . I can hardly tell the difference from each character which either stems from inexperience from either me or the author or is used to establish a harem. honestly one of the few where I would specifically recommend harem due to the corner that you have written yourself into with the at least 5 separate women that are all stingy and half are flirty and the rest are just blunt. regardless keep up the good work hope you can find a good ground and escape the corner.
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man,this story is kinda stupid,the people in this are not believable, I got a couple of laughs here and there,but the world building doesn't make sense.