Shameless Author's review.
You'll find crazy adventures, Sophisticated, intelligent MC and strong Female Lead that helps MC to achieve his goals.
Well, this book is the longest that I've written.
Kinda scuffed by the algorithm, but I promise you won't disappointed.
Cheers! Happy Reading!
Definitely not recommend, this have a lot of unnecessary details that just are the joy of few and the annoy of the rest. the grammar is so-so with chaps that are just awful, the plot is medium good but with a enormous lack of realistic flow. Is fantasy yes, but the Author put real martial arts that lack reality instead of make a fake one that fix in the fantasy. Then the girls plot flow in the novel... pfft more cheap cr*p, tou in tou is a waste of time.
Most people are commenting about later on i got to chapter 5 but feel like I have missed about 100 nothing makes sense or it does to the me but not to the reader as nothing is explained and I mean nothing he dies and is told he will reincarnate to a world and that world will be random and he will get a power, does he check to see what his power is no because apparently he will lose his memories(not sure when we are told that but ok) then he choses the worst world to go to because of a reason he knows. Yep he chose it because we just ignore the fact that the world is meant to be random oh and if he loses his memories he won't even know why he should of chosen that world but OK, skip to him landing on the new world it works like a game he knows it acts like a game and thinks that's normal , wait what the actual **** is this story writing I got to him pulling some magic out of his ass and getting a transforming wolf girl dog thing before I gave up don't even bother trying if your actually after a story
Most chapters are long enough comparable to 'novels posted in NU' and it is a good binge reading for a couple of days. The plot and the world building are impeccable to the point of 'there is an actual thought behind some events that may lead to some future developments and may be in the next couple of arcs'. However, there is some inconsistency in the MC's character development like his past trauma that hugely affect his trust of other people especially women, and no clear progression in which or what way his character will end up to be, either he is good or bad. So far, he stands in the neutral side of things and he just wants to be with his loved ones.
One thing that I really love about this novel is the way how the author solve the OPness early on in the novel. I thought that the OPness will remain throughout the novel like convenient powerups to deal with the villains head on. Thank goodness that it isn't. There is still the worry that I felt as a reader towards the MC and co. whenever a villain much much stronger than them appears despite of the OPness reavealed early on in the novel.
*There are rarely few misspells spanning across the novel but the story is still easily understandable.
I am thoroughly heavily invested in this novel and I want to see it to its end. Good luck Crow in writing this until the end and in school!
why did you change the story I liked the slime one???
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Hello Yubi
So far, this novel is really good. I love the characters in the story. (especially the admins) This story is probably the second best in the entire website. (158th on internationals) P.S. I am making up stuff about the internationals... so yea
I really like this novel so far. Also, people should know in advance, villain here, I am talking about the MC, doesn't mean evil protagonist like Reverend Insanity. It just means the dude or second generation rich guy who become a stepping stone for the protagonist (good, neutral or evil).[img=coins][img=coins][img=coins]
I'm dropping this review only for the author to do a mass release, I will read it after it has 100 chap.
Writing Quality: It seems to be quite well written with some grammatical errors, however, they are within the acceptable range and they do not make you want to stop reading.Stability of Updates: Can't say much about that one as I have just begun reading this novel.Story Development: I feel like the pace isn't fast nor slow, as we can the story progressing quite well.Character Design: It's really good (in my opinion) as it seems that the Mc will go under a multitude of changes in the upcoming chapters.World Background: Information is slowly starting to come out as I read the chapters and it seems interesting for the most part.Overall, I'd say that this a novel worth reading.
How the fk is Mc 15 and every other side character they literally act like 10-13 years old at most.And than there is the Fact that Mc turns put to be a Beta Simp at chapter 20 something that was so put if nowhere just because he has seen 1 goodlooking girl.
The author has grown since his previous work Top Star which can be seen in this book. The build-up and pace of the story are nice and it has the yandere tag. I am also an author of the book- Transferred to the Monster World you can give it a try .