It's rare not having a bunch of new characters at once. Just one to begin with was much welcomed.I was surprised with the rich vocabulary from the very beginning of the story, it might be a little overwhelming for someone who barely played a rpg once, but if you get past this, you'll be surprised with the comedy.I like to read and the situation with the characters are merging well.Btw Guidance is a fair name. It's far from the bunch of "God" or "GM" etc. It isn't much but that's great to me.Finally, you'll find yourself in front of a first-person narrated story. That refreshing! It's much easier to relate to the troubles Moriya casualy talks about. Modern problems(/interests) require modern solutions.Also I don't know if the cover of the novel has especially been done for it, but oh boy does it fit well.Great work so far.
This is a review that adheres to Webnovel's provided guidelines. Each category will get a brief explanation. I then cap off this review with my personal opinion. Writing quality is five stars. Virtually spotless, no glaring spelling errors or poor paragraph spacing. Grammar is superb as well.Story Development is three stars. It's slow paced, which isnt necessarily bad, but you wouldn't really see a semblance of a plot at a first glance. We're only five chapters in though, so it's a bit too soon to fairly judge this. Regardless, three stars for now.Character design is five stars. Bamboo, Panda. Enough said.Updating stability is five stars. I think this is a stupid metric to be included for users to use for reviews, so it's a freebie.World background is three stars. The world just kind of exists, no interesting descriptions since the story is from the perspective of a grass.Bamboo is a type of grass by the way, I just learned that while trying to figure out what to call Zhu Zi, the main character.Anyway, the story is pretty entertaining and I'd definitely suggest reading it.
This story has a lot of interesting things in it and the way the story flows is just right I really love this story I hope you continue to right the story and update it till the end?PS: Maraming salamat sa tuloytuloy na update ?
I think I am in love with this novel. Definitely the best piece of work I've read on WN yet. With beautiful prose and an even prettier storyline to accompany it, Adtraic Verity is surely a great work flowing with care and passion.Asahi and Aletha are a charming pair of main leads, one mature and the other playful, they perfectly complement each other's personalities and clearly depend on each other. The way the author displayed their relationships with the masterfully crafted dialogue is astonishingly good, and that is just the beginning of things.Each chapter keeps getting better in terms of both the intrigue and the plot, the pace is perfect and the descriptions are jaw-dropping. This is definitely going to be a read of a lifetime for many people and I would highly recommend everyone to check it out.
Initially I wanted to wait for a few more chapters before I give my review but because I want to be one of the first ten, he it is.First things first, the writing quality is top notch, it's a top tier and a rare quality in this website. 5/5Second, the story itself is unique and a very original one, in short it is one of the kind. 5/5As for the characters, although for now they're still not a lot, they're all nicely written. They have their own feelings and is not a bland characters. 5/5The updating rate is quite unstable but it is understandable because of the fact that the author is also currently writing his other novels, for now. 5/5And lastly, the world background. Considering that this novel only has 14 chapters for now, it is doing a good job so far. The descriptions were easy to understand and imagine. 5/5P. S. I highly recommend to read this novel now and become a new, Reader of Fate.
Over All its a great concept which's executions is really not that great imo. It starts off with the MC being super sub. MC is also super cringe with what he says, And that is before all the Japanese words (Which im normally fine with but their are to many here) Later On it gets really confusing with realities and then it feels like the first 100 chapters were the prologue and I should've started at the chapter 98 mark and saved a bunch of coins
A very good and interesting book, I find it intriguing .... I like the MC and how he is eager to get stronger..The plot is great. The author should always proofread the chapters before publishing.. and update stability should be stable. Above all, the book is recommendable.
Awesome, just it.
It's an isekai novel, but different all I've read before.
I'm really enjoying.
The form he organizes the world, all the things. Everything has a good structure and is working very well.
The way that the people live with magic, all the society is built around it.
Not just it, but the kingdom organization, the army, all the secret societies. It's all wonderful.
Any chance to see it in a manhua?
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This isnt a story for Kids coz this shows real life, real jobs, real struggle, real problems, real hopes and dreams, and a real dream that came true... a Kid would never understand and relate to this Story
I dont recommend this story to anyone, unless you are one to those who work their butt day and night, those guys who are fighting against poverty.
This story may give you Hope and Inspiration,
Hello, Web Novel site, I am Mack Samson. I run a new blog called Weeb Revues that covers Japanese light novels and such. This review of War Grounds was requested by the author, SilentMild, on Facebook. I am going to give my first impressions of the web novel; 35 chapters at this time.
The premise of war grounds is a very strange twist to the usual MMO/isekai light novel. Our American(?) main character, Al Gentrix, has gotten his booty kicked on the VR battle royale game, War Grounds, due to it having a toxic playerbase that you'd expect from most MMOs. When he's just about to throw in the towel, he's told of an app called SARS that's supposed to help. Al installs it... and it basically turns Al into Kirito from SAO.
SARS grants Al an OP hidden class right out of the gate, and is able to take control of Al's character through autopilot. However, the major drawback to this is that Al's mind could get damaged from long periods of rapid inputs. SARS is also able to hack War Grounds' database and find all kinds of information, but it can only scan one area of the game at a time.
Al is a very greedy person. He literally plays War Grounds like a NEET as a coping mechanism for his father's death. This does lead to some spats with his mom, as you can expect. However, this aspect of Al's character doesn't get explored too much, at least not thus far. But hey, I don't mind because I just want to see MMO adventures. My fav, however, is SARS. He's a good boy, or rather, a good bot. If you love GlAdOs (is that how you spell it?) from Portal or AIDAN from The Illuminae Files, you'll love SARS. He's got some great deadpan sass that makes reading this web novel a pleasure. Other characters include Al's IRL friends Nisha and Sophie, who are also players in War Grounds (won't spoil who their avatars are, though). Al also befriends an orc named Papa Bear, but he seems to be kind of like that brash and annoying guy.
The biggest appeal ends up being the story and world. War Grounds has a lot of thought put into as far as game modes and mechanics. It does get repetitive as the author lists every single game asset with its description every single time, however I don't mind because it accurately reflects how it would look in the game. Imagine if you were playing a complex JRPG and it only told you what stuff did after your first time seeing it! The ******* and momentum for action is also good. The only issue is that it's a bit skeletal. All the basic ideas are great, but there could be some more substance. I'm also a sucker for books written in the traditional format, as opposed to the one-line paragraph style that's also used in Reincarnated as a Sword.
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Verdict: 8/10
War Grounds is great so far. The story is more than sufficiently entertaining, it just needs some flesh. Writing is damn hard to do well, but writing the skeleton is quite possibly the hardest part. War Grounds is a great story from SilentMild!
Read it up to chapter 30 something because I didn't want to judge too quickly. I was wrong. The MC is a coward, awkward guy even if his cultivation is high, he mumbles, stutters and cannot even act normal. Dont get me started on his fighting skills. The dude is a pussy. End of, no character improvement. If otakus are presented like this in fiction I hope in reality they're not that worse in Asia. If they are, I feel sorry for their parents.